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i have just finished reading this story i feel its great it has a lot of twists which are good i dont think i have read somthing like this in a long time this is an amazing story of love compassion &revenge what a way to go a great story well worth reading and the final twist at the end with his daughter was brilliant well done great story more please.

the style of this story seems to be interesting far more than others read its not heavy or light but inbetween two murders and a change with a twist at the end

i have just finished reading this story i feel its great it has a lot of twists which are good i dont think i have read somthing like this in a long time this is an amazing story of love compassion &revenge what a way to go a great story well worth reading and the final twist at the end with his daughter was brilliant well done great story more please

i have read parts 1&2 and i must agree the twist at the ewnd of why you are wearingg earings was most unexpected and a vert good twist i will read parts 3onwards at a lter stage &comment further well done good story so far

I really liked the ending "and why are you wearing earings and a wig?"
I'd agree that the murder of Nash was unnecessary.
I'm sure you could have though of something that would ruin him less fatally.

I think you should just mark this serial "Complete" and let it stand the way it is after part 5.  I simply loved the ending, which elicited the most wonderful combination of smiles and tears.  Kids can be just amazing, can't they?

This has been a very good story so far.  I do hope you will be continuing and concluding the story soon.  It's been two months since the last episode.  

Personally, I think that Nash's murder was an incorrect direction to go with the story.  I didn't see Pat as that vindictive.  However, since we don't know your mind, you may have another twist in mind.  That said, it may have been better to just expose Nash for his incompetence at investing and his womanizing.  A change in him might have led to a spin off story.  The world is full of possibilities.

Please give us the rest of the story soon.

Much love,

Diane

A nice story so far. I think the murder of Nash went a bit far.
Heather

Great story  I  Think that the story is in many ways about our lifes
Our fears our guilts are all there in the story Very good story move along at a good pace.Keep up the good work  

Just an excellent piece of fiction.  All four chapters make a most interesting read. Obviously, the guilt, shame, and self recrimination experienced by crossdressers written by someone who understands.  Captures the essence of the "lipstick lesbian" fantasy for those of us heterosexual crossdressers.  

While I realize that this story is fiction, I couldn't help identifying with Pat's predicament.  The taking of Dr. Frankenwiener's life can be viewed as the righteous consequence of Pat's ordeal.  One can even feel a tinge of glee in that some righteous revenge was extracted from Dr. Frankenwiener for her diabolic scheme.

The murder of Nash on the other hand occurs rather abruptly and with little seeming provocation.  At that point in the story I ceased identifying with Pat and began reading from a more detached perspective.  How does one account for Pat's violent reaction to someone who has caused him (or to this point, his family) very little actual harm?  Is there some other explanation of why he was murdered?  I trust time will tell as it doesn't seem this is the end of the story, a story with so many loose ends.

all the chapters are great and worth reading

Nice story, the fourth installment shows a promising mystery tale.  Interesting, perhaps a bit more on the "widow" will be forthcoming, eh?

A great storey, all 3 chapters. A little on the bitter side but with a ring of reality to it.

At last... An author (who can actually write) who writes beautiful stories.  I love your work.

Very nice introduction, I think we are all guilty of skipping around for the "Good Stuff," at least once in a while. ;-)

Keep working, I am curious to see how this ends,
Gail