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The Dress
by Dan Collins

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Comment by suba suba on 11/07/19
qC0oj6 It as not that I want to duplicate your web-site, but I really like the pattern. Could you tell me which design are you using? Or was it custom made?

Comment by best pron on 10/26/19
pieZWu I wish to read even more things about it!

Comment by matzcrorkz on 08/03/14
1tUlKK Great article.Much thanks again. Keep writing.

Comment by Svetlana on 08/07/10
Sexist men beware! This could happen to you if a powerful woman gets ahold of you.  Unless of course, it's what you want.  Great story.

Comment by eric on 07/01/10
i have to say i wish that was me

Comment by Priscilla Ann on 02/07/08
Excellent tale. Though I am not usually into magic transformations, prefering the standard dominatrix type of forced feminization such as what my Mistress has done to me, this story was well worth the time. Of course, as a victim of forced feminization and maid training, I naturally feel sorry for poor Marie and wonder what it was that made Danni punish him/her this way.

Comment by rhonda on 11/09/06
I had to comment, this was just a terrific story

Comment by Lita on 11/28/04
WOW!!! Great story for a Freshman effort! I rarely comment unless genuinly impressed, and you have impressed me greatly. Easily the best storysite story in months!

Comment by Early June on 11/28/04
How very evil. What a cruel thing to do to someone.  I am still hoping that justice will prevail and will free Marie.  Your writing style is good and holds interest while drawing the reader in.  Your poor hapless heroine had my sympathy.  Thank you for sharing this tale with us.



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