Lovely story - a part 1 anxiously awaiting past 2!

A nice, gentle story that leaves the conclusion to our imagination.

Well written with few grammatical errors.

Thank you.

Cute story. Wishing  sometimes makes it so.

Loved the story.  I would love to have read chapters 2 and 3 and 4 and 5 when you have time to write them.
Please continue this story.

Dear Ms. Karen Anne,

Your stories were recommended by another Crystal's Storysite writer, Anne Marie Bauer.

I'm my Mistress/Wife's, well-trained Housemaid/husband. I'm also the only Wage Earner.

I picked a short story due to my time restraints. I work two jobs, plus all my chores at home.

I liked this story. Sisters are the best!

While brief, this story showed family love and care rather than a, "I'm getting even," attitude. I'll bet that Miss Debbie's, "new," Sister will be a good one, who will love and care for her because, "she," wants to; not because she has to.

When I get back from work tonight, I'll read some more of your highly recommended stories.

Sisterly yours,

Missy-Susan Pauline Bauer

This is a true sisterly love story.
Great, write more like this.
Kisses.
Silvia.

Uh, hey, uh....Deb...confidentially...from one "Deb" to another...jeans are NOT what a "real girl" would wear alone in an apartment.  You want to know what a "real girl" would wear alone?  Check out the animated cartoon feature "Road to El Dorado" and look at the character "Chel".  Study how she looks and what she wears.  THAT is girl, hon.  THAT is girl.

GREAT STORY,BUT TOO SHORT

  nice start   things that dreams are made of  ... thank you for the dream  .....Rone  xoxoxoxoxoxox  :)

a sweet story of sisterly love but to short

Great start!  You do a great job with ALL your stories!!  Keep up the incredible work!!!

Your fan,
Tiffany Jean
aka The Vinyl Princess

Good story so far, it needs a prelude of how cynthia got started, like what he told Deb. And it needs to be completed with two sosters having a life together.

Excellently sensitive story; as with others, it's too short - naughty, naughty.

good story line but i would have liked to know his sisters reaction the first time she caught him story is to short

Very nice start on a story line my dear. Please continue with Cynetta's adventures! Love & kisses  Carolyn Renee

This is a very nice short, short story. It feels like a teaser or the very beginning of a much longer work. A lot of detail has been forgone because it is so short. A little more background on the characters would be nice. And the rest of the evening. Thank you Karen for this quicky.

This is good, but it's like a scene pulled out of a story.  I know Cynetta features in many of your stories was this supposed to be a taste of her beginnings??

Very nice.  Of course, there is the question of the sister's motivation.  We're sort of left to guess and wonder why she is demanding that Cynetta make an appearance.  There's a certain amount of suspense building as Cynetta gets ready.  I suspect the final scene is meant to convey acceptance, but if so, you didn't really make it definitive.  An added smile, or a hug might finish it nicely.

 I thought this was the best story I had read this year until the end came up and kicked me in the belly button and made my navel ring vibrate.  Naughty girl to stop there.