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The Dress Shop
by Margaret Jeanette

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Comment by Silvia     (from Brazil) on 10/25/09
WOW ! Congratulations for this story!
This is a good story, even if Marjorie is a bully, and put Tomi in a dress. But when Tomi agreed with what Marjorie has made with him, everything was fine.
Kisses.
Silvia.

Comment by jillieuk   on 07/21/07
please update this lovely story

Comment by julie j on 09/18/04
this again is a great story i have enjoyed this very much the main charactor tom in this story soon took to womens clothes and made a lot of money working in the store its lucky that his wife is so understanding

Comment by Rose on 08/15/04
I very much liked the stoy and how lucky the star of the story is to have a very understanding wife and employer.
Is there going to be a second part, if so I can't wait.

Comment by Francine on 08/14/04
Hi Margaret  :-)

I liked the first story, but was puzzled by the title. I read your revised story, which I enjoyed also, it fits the title.  :]
I like positive stories, so thank you.
Hugs, Fran

Comment by Sharon on 08/14/04
If a man is THAT macho....time isn't going to cure that

I know I would feel that when I get married is that woman is MY wife and I'll be damned if I'll give her up.
No matter what.

Comment by Robyn Smith on 08/12/04
I don’t see where the dress shop mentioned in the summary actually makes it into the story.  We have Mike losing his job as a woodworker, being transformed into Barb at home, then employed in a beauty shop and eventually married to the first man he dates.

The story paints a good picture of an under achieving S.O.B., who too willingly goes along with the transition.  The writing is good, but I personally find the storyline in need of something more.



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