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Driving Miss Debbie
by Caroline Bradley

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Comment by suba suba on 11/07/19
YKeynP Looking forward to reading more. Great post.Much thanks again. Really Cool.
Comment by great link building on 11/20/13
mlOalR Very informative article. Really Great.
Comment by oem software on 02/11/12
v3baD6 The Author is crazy..!!
Comment by Silvia. on 06/21/11
Where's the end of the story?
Comment by Vivien Tena on 09/07/07
Well I am enjoying the story and do hope it continues soon!


                    Vivien

Comment by Sally on 07/27/03
Lovely well written story.
Comment by Hebe Dotson on 08/24/02
Episodes 1, 2, and 4 are very good, but Episode 3 seems a bit gratuitous -- as if the author had written it for something else and then decided to throw it in here. It does nothing to advance the story, and I think it should have been X rated. With that said, I'm looking forward to Episode 5 -- I think.
Comment by Andi Foster on 08/22/02
So nasty rapist Tor was just a bad dream... Hmmmm... I think that's the Bobby Ewing gambit isn't it? Still, it did keep the story out of the weeds. I suppose.

It's good to see this well-written story continuing, but I think this episode seemed a bit rushed with introducing the "Going full time" element and ringing down the curtain a bit suddenly on the criminal investigation. By the way, was Tor's boss a Superintendent or an Inspector? Both ranks were referred to.

It'll be fascinating to see where the author takes this next. Debbie's transition? Will the publicity surrounding the trial "out" her? Some big issues there.
Comment by Andi Foster on 07/28/02
This is a well-written story, with some potentially good, original characters and plot ideas.

I've enjoyed the first two episodes, but I'm not sure where the author is going with this sudden excursion into B&D, and Tor essentially raping Debbie, in Part 3. This doesn't seem credible or sensible from a police officer seeking cooperation, nor is it consistent with the character's previous behaviour. I hope there's some plan behind this, and the story hasn't just gone off into the weeds...
Comment by Nellie D on 06/29/02
Another good chapter in this ongoing story.
Comment by Nellie D on 06/12/02
A different plot line than most and hopefully one that will be continued. The concept of the police seeking the help of a civilian, let alone a TV, isn't that common. So with this in the story and good writing, it makes a good read so far.

Thank you Caroline.


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