I just love your story!  And thanks for Chapter 16 especially.
LOL WbG xx

    Sydney Michelle, you rock! Without a doubt one of the finest series of stories I've read on this website.  Sadie Hawkins Day and A Dutiful Wife were outstanding.  They had it all, a nicely nuanced plot, great characterization, just enough conflict to keep it interesting and most of all, lots of love.  Deep, soulful, abiding love. Dare I day it, real love.  When I came to the end of Dutiful Wife I was bawling like baby.  Thank you, my dear.  Thank you, thank you, thank you.  All my love, Marcia Aubrey.

Sydney blasts another one out of the park! She's the Hank Aaron of the TG fiction world (and didn't need artificial enhancements to do it)!

This sequel just adds onto the first without missing a step (could that be a dance step? <giggle>).

As the Andrea True Connection once sang More, More, More!

Great sequal to Sadie Hawkins Day; that maintains the joy and humour of the earlier story. The drescription of the family scenes puts the reader right in there and helps add to the feel good atmosphere. I would be interested in a further sequal but even though scifi is not normally my bag but because of the quality I am certainly interested in other stories by Sydney Michelle. Thanks Brian

The writing is good.  But I do think the story dragged on too long for want of a true plot, and seemed rather repetitive at times, with the same scenario presented time and again.

WOW!!!!!!  You've done it again! A truly wonderful story. You write very well, your story lines are sensational, and your characters very special people.

Suggestion: How about a story on some of the friends of Blake & Jamie?  The potential is endless. Your readers, like me, would LOVE it!

Thanks so very much for the fine writing!!!

I'm stunned.  I went to the comments page after reading part 5 figuring I'd add my comments to an already long list of compliments.  But I'm the first?  Something ain't right here.  

Girls, pay attention!  This is good stuff.  So far, this is a sweet love story that turns on a wonderfully creative idea.  Just what would it be like if society institutionalized the pairing through marriage of women with men who would take care of them like a traditional wife?  

The writing implicitly conveys in a sweet, gauzy way the slightly over-the-top feelings of joy and love of its protagonist and "his" spouse.  You really get the feeling that you are looking in on two newlyweds still madly in love with each other and discovering the joy of life together. It's maybe a litte too sweet at times, but that's just a quibble.

Not only is this pair in love, but they're in lust too, and you get to look in on that as well. Hot stuff.

So way to go Sydney, babe.  Another creative idea, nicely written and fun to read.  Brava!