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Duty, Honor, Country
by Brandy Dewinter

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Comment by STANLEY MORTON on 08/10/07
SANDY IS ABLE TO OVERCOME THE PAIN AND HURT OF THE MISSION. SHE PROVES TO BE MADE OF STERN STUFF. SHE BENDS BUT DOES NOT BREAK. HER REWARD IS THE CONGRESSIONAL MEDAL OF HONOR. I JUST WISH THAT SHE COULD HAVE GELDED THE GENERAL. THIS STORY NEEDS TO BE MADE INTO A MOVIE.

Comment by STANLEY MORTON on 08/09/07
SANDY'S CHOICE MAKES HER A TRUE SOLDIER. TO ACCEPT BECOMING A BONDAGE SLAVE, HAVE HER BODY VIOLATED TO HELP THE PREVIOUS VICTIM MADE ME CRY FOR SANDY. I KNOW IT IS A STORY, BUT I CARE FOR THE CHARACTERS AS MUCH AS THE AUTHOR. NO I WANT TO SEE SANDY DESTROY THE LEADER. THAT WILL BE DEVINE JUSTICE.

Comment by STANLEY MORTON on 08/09/07
POOR EL SUPREMO, HE WON'T HAVE A CHANCE AGAINST SANDY. SHE HAS OVERCOME HER DEMON. NOW SHE IS READY TO KILL. BUT SHE HAS LEARNED LOVE FROM MARYLIN AND JAYMI. BRANDI, SANDY'S REACTION TO RAPE ARE DEAD ACCURATE. i HAVE HAD A FRIEND BRUTALIZED. SHE BARELY CAN LET ME BE NEAR HER NOW. WE WERE BEST FRIENDS TOO

Comment by STANLEY MORTON on 08/08/07
OF ALL THE GIRLS TO BE HURT, SANDY WAS THE WORST TO BE HURT. GOD, HOW I HATE RAPE!!!! I AM SORRY BRANDY, BUT I HAVE SEEN TOO MUCH HURT TO NOT CRY FOR SANDY.

Comment by STANLEY MORTON on 08/08/07
WOW! SANDY THIRD IN COMMAND. I LOVE THE WAT THE GENERAL OPENED UP A CAN OF 'WHUPASS' ON THAT BULLY. YES, I LOVE TO WATCH WRESTLING TOO[THAT IS WHERE THAT PHRASE COMES FROM. BUT I FELT SORRY FOR THE POOR GIRL THAT LOST IT. SHE CAN, AFTER HELP, JOIN SANDY. IT IS JUST THAT THE POOR GIRL WAS HURT BEFORE. BRANDY, MORE HUMOR IN THE FUTURE. YO HAVE THE GIFT OF ADDING HUMOR WITHOUT MESSING UP THE STORY. A TRUE ARTIST

Comment by STANLEY MORTON on 08/07/07
BRANDY, HERE YOU HAVE SHOWN THE MIND SET OF THOSE DRESSING OPPOSIT OF THEIR GENDER. YOU HAVE A TALENT FOR SUCH STORIES. PLEASE CONTINUE TO CREATE ANYTHING ELSE WOULD BE A WASTE OF GOD GIVEN TALENT

Comment by STANLEY MORTON on 08/07/07
POOR SANDY, FIRST TIME DRESSED AS A WOMAN IS THE WORST. NOW TO PUT ON THE BOOBS AND PANTY. BRANDY, YOU DO HAVE A SENSE OF HUMOR, IT IS YOUR STRENGTH IN WRITING AS WELL AS YOUR KNOCK OUT IMAGES, I SAW THE IMAGES ON YOUR CYBER HOME FOR SANDY AND COMPANY, A WET DREAM, EVERY ONE OF THEM

Comment by Stanley Morton on 08/07/07
I just read the first chapter. I love the way the general turns out to be a woman, cross dressed man or android. Brandy, Classic cliffhanger that TV uses in Science Fiction . I think the Sci-Fi channel would love this story

Comment by Angie on 10/09/06
I finished reading this story (Duty, Honor, Country) on the same day (10/9/06) that North Korea set off their first nuke (or squib, perhaps - the news is still iffy). Talk about timeliness!

A great story, well written, lots of plot twists.  


Comment by RONE on 07/12/06
      WOW !     thank you   Rone

Comment by Chris Leonheart on 05/11/06
This was one interesting read, i have to admit that you are a truly talented author. I love your works and look foreward to reading more of them.

Comment by Marshall on 08/31/01
You know, the only thing that ruins Your incredible stories (LL& P, Milady, Lucky, Whos Body, Xora, and now DHC) is the word Finis. i border on disappointment at the close of every story.  

Every story has been creative, inciteful (sp?), and just plain fun to read.

Congratulations, thanks and please do keep them coming!

Comment by Patricia Pendragon on 08/23/01
Nice start to the story and I will be interested o see ow you build it out from here. The plotline reminds me of a story I read some years back about a youth in the Confederate Army during the Civil War who ha to switch roles and eventually gender to serve his 'country'. I look forward to the next installmet.



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