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Comment by ELLY BOY on 12/04/11
i LOVED THE STORY AS HE BECAME THE GIRL INSIDE AND OTHER THAN THE SEVERE SPANLING ACTION AT THE END IT IS A BEAUTIFUL STORY, BUT WHY DID IT END LIKE THAT....SHE IS TRANSFORMING INTO A VERY SEXY GIRL AND SHE HAS TO HAVE HER TIME WITH KENNY.....PLEASE WRITE MORE IF YOU CAN THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL....DID SHE EVER MAKE IT WITH KENNY...WHAT HAPPENED TO HER
Comment by goolosh on 11/23/11
bad i hate how its written in 2 person
Comment by Silvia. on 05/17/11
Very bad story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Comment by thepantyboylover on 03/16/08
I just loved your story. I wished I had a a mommy and a daddy like that. Made me put on my panties again and shove a dildo up my ass.
Comment by PantyBoy11 on 04/29/07
GREAT story i love it
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