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Embarrassing Back Fire
by Dick Dunham

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Comment by Silvia. on 08/19/11
If he get angry, he can kill the wife.
And this can happen!
Bad story.

Comment by Victoria on 06/06/10
  giggle..loved the story,I am here on a lazy sunday reading.. all dressed sexy and in heels of course lol.I would love to get hipnotised lol where is that DR?????   good work

Comment by sofia on 01/29/07
SOY DE BUENOS AIRES ARGENTINA Y ME GUSTO MUCHO TU RELATOS.

GRACIAS POR ESCRIBIR

SOFIA


Comment by Dick Dunham on 01/28/07
In my story submission I gave credit to Stephany Ann Chavez and Alana Peterson for the story idea but I guess I did it wrong and it did not show up in the story.  Sorry about that..Dick Dunham.

Comment by Graham Smailes on 01/28/07
Interesting story. Of course it was a slightly better story ibn the original format by Alana Peterson and Stephanie Ann Chavez, before you plagiarised it. The evidence is there because you have even left in a reference to 'Dr Specks' - the character in ms chavez's original. Your doctor is doctor Lewis remember?

Comment by Anita on 01/27/07
I hope you take this one further as it really has potential. Well done!



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