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Emma's First Day
by Sarah Smith

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Comment by dawn on 11/05/13
Lovely sweet story with lots of potential keep writing
Comment by Silvia. on 06/15/12
Bad story.
Comment by Amanda on 02/27/12
Is there going to be a part two?
Comment by Sharon on 02/15/10
That was a lovely story i love reading about mothers who turn their
sons into Beautiful young ladies.It just shows in every boy their is a beautiful young girl waiting to come out.
Comment by julie on 06/20/03
an interesting story but to quick into it for my liking i would have prefered a bit of enforcment to this story it would make it more interesting
Comment by Susan Pauline Bauer on 06/16/03
Dear Sarah,

A nice, lively story. I have to concur with a previous comment, that it was a bit too rushed. A lot more detail could have been used when he prepared his body and when his Mother was helping him get dressed. The change to, "Emma," certainly brought a new life to life. This part has to be just the begining. Emma has get dressed for work, she has to intermingle with other genetic girls than his Aunt. There are so many avenues to go down. I wish you well with your future writings.

Susan
Comment by tesco shopper on 06/02/03
a bit rushed in my opinion.. needs more meat to the story.. but it is an interesting read if not a little short
Comment by Julie Shaw on 06/01/03
I agree - great start, let's see where it goes from here!
Comment by Nellie D on 06/01/03
A good start with interesting revelations and well written.
It just screams to be continued.
Comment by Allie on 06/01/03
A very nice story of love between a mother and her Son/Daughter.

Would like to see how his/her first day at work goes.
Comment by paula on 06/01/03
If only more moms were like that. A sweet story


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