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The End
by JulieChristine

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Comment by eric on 07/06/10
this story was big to me becuse i did some cutting on me and i was in a nut house 4 some time and yes its real

Comment by Silvia     (from Brazil) on 04/23/09
I believe in spiritualism, and I Think she died and now she is in a spiritual world, and she is in her true body, a female body.
Good story, I liked it.
Kisses.
Silvia.

Comment by Jade on 01/17/07
Like the story though it was way to short in my opinion you should have had a little interaction with the sister and explainied the whole thing with the hosptial a little bit more.  Other wise it was a very interesting story.

Comment by Pervette on 06/15/02
Okay, I feel better now that Jezzi says she didn't understand the
ending.  Because I didn't understand it, either.  As for the
cutting busines, yes, I've heard of that kind of thing, but I've
never heard of its being associated with any kind of T*ness.  Learn
something new every day....

Pervy

Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 06/15/02
I never heard of this cutting business before; is this true?  I've been an 8th grade teacher for over 30 years and thought I'd heard it all, but never a case of this.  Also, I didn't get the ending:  Was it a dream sequence?  Had he/she died?  Was she really a girl all along imagining herself a boy?



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