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End of an Old Life and Start of a New
by Paul G Jutras

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Comment by Barbara Lynn Terry on 12/29/04
Paul, this story, in letter form, is all too often, sad but true...why does society inflict THEIR beliefs and morals on us, when they don't practice what they preach? How many of the "normal" society, is guilty of incest, rape, bigomy, cheating on their wives and husbands, robbery, and other crimes...? It would be a wonderful world, if everyone had respect for everyone else.

Barbara Lynn Terry

Comment by Dillon Doe on 11/29/04
Just wondering who scott is?

acording to the synopsis its about Steve.. yet Scott finds the letter and reads it only for us to find out that Steve was reading it all along at the end?

thats confusing

other than that.. not bad



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