you should have tagged snuff. it just ruined my mood

WOW I LOVE THIS STORY TO THE MAX

 This is really a hurtful story. If you have a problem with your life, I am sorry for you. Most of us handle our natures without regret.
You have written some decent stories, but this is like you were writing your own suicide note. If you need help please get it.
                                      Michelle

I don't know if you really think that you're a writer. Of course you're not one. I'm very sorry for you!
Please, stop trying to write. You can't do this, bacause you don't know how to do.
You're very,very bad at this.
Silvia.

you are a realy awasome writer and i have a request may i please write a sequal some thing like a friend of the late sissy exacting revenge iv started work on it ill send it 2 you n you can fix and make it better as (if your interested) i know you will. iv yet 2find a vengence story. well hope u aprove your sissy jamieelove. k  laters

(OMG) pls please i beg of you P.L.E.A.S.E. put a warning up on your next story. i mean i or some1 could have gotten hurt realy bad on that. . fiction or not im going 2go cry realy hard now =(

I felt very upset after reading this. They MURDERED her, and then had sex while she was dying.

That...frightens me. I don't mind a story where someone is pushed to the point where they take their life, but when the murderers get away with it!? It...bothers me. Immensely. Now I'd like to say 'change it please' but that would be arrogant and selfish.

So I've said my piece: your story writing skills are quite good, but the content...disturbed me.

I agree with Nina.Well written and reminiscent of the sex/hanging scenes in Burroughs'Naked Lunch.More like this please!

I vehemently disagree with all of the comments posted here. This is a wonderful story, rather well written and very erotic. Perhaps only those of us who happen to have such fantasies can appreciate the courage it takes to share them with each other. Such ideas are not to be repressed and condemned, but examined and distinguished from reality for our and our society's health. How dare the rest of yu condemn this tale! I believe it is much better than many of the other stories posted here and would like to read more like it.
Thank You Meeah Soo,
Nina

I agree with "Jane" above a sad little story.  I was into it for the whole ride and used half a box of kleenex.  No clitties up;however, decidedly unsexy.  Still I think nihilistic art is kind of magnetic in Count Yorga way.  

I feel this was in very bad taste, life is a wonderful thing and we must all live and enjoy the time we are on earth. Do not write anymore like this.

Dear Meah
  I am so sorry that you felt you had to write that most depressing story.  It suggests that you may dealing with a great deal of weighty depression.  I suggest you engage a therapist counselor to deal with it ASAP.  
Mandee

I think this story should have never been allowed to publish. I am sad and disappointed that it was published and furthermore I think it should be removed. Well, I guess we are all a little perverted but to write a scene where somebody is dying and a couple f**cking at the same time in the same room is quite revolting.

greetings, sissycamila

I don't believe in censorship, especially in these strange times, but this story dealt with issues of suicide and self hate that are potentially very dangerous territory.  I'm just asking you to consider what someone might feel reading this if they were very depressed or confused about their "trans-ness".  There should have been much more warning of the content.  There was none.  However, having read this story I'm quite concerned about the state of mind of the author.  Are you OK there?  Do you need to talk?

Not good.  Not good at all.  Something this extreme should have had _far_ more warning and descriptive description to it.  Snuff stories are not something I'd even bother reading.  Perhaps as an exercise in literary development could they be useful but not for general consumption.  At the least, if you're going to post a story like this you should've done a better job declaring it.

Fran

I love extreme stories but this was a bit too much even for my tastes. Humilated, tormented and abused sissy stories are great but not dead.

Sorry your name came out wrong Meeah I did not mean to insult, is was the old spell checker slip.

Kristi

   This story is disturbing and upsetting.  Now don't give me the this is fiction line.  The content of your story is over all lines of common decency. Don't you know that we lose far too many of our sisters to suicide as it is?  A compassionate tale yes, where the person feels trapped I have read, and there is one one this site. I knew that this story might have had this conclusion when I started it, but I didn't believe you would take it in this direction.

   I do not recommend reading this story and that is the first time I have written such a comment.  You remember "sticks and stones may break my bones but words will never hurt me?"  It is not true.  Words are much more powerful than physical harm in most cases and the damage lasts much longer. Think carefully about the words you write Mae. Can you not have anything redeeming in your story?

  Admittedly I had a strong emotional reaction to your story but I also have thought about it quite a bit.  I hope you remove this story from this site voluntarily.  I do not dislike you Mae, at all. Just this story. I think you are better than this.

Hugs,

Kristi

Well, you know...there may be people out there who like this kind
of story. Having once known someone who did die this way,* I didn't
much care for it.
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--Pervette
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*Not forced into it, as this poor fellow was, but still...

God awful story!!!  So sick and perverse!  Anyone who thinks this is entertainment should go and see a shrink and quit writing ANYTHNG that comes to their mind down on paper.  Absolutely discusting!!

Sad so very sad a story one day the bad the wife and her guy had done will rebound on them!!!!!.  I hope so but a very good little story but sad

Wow, I wonder if this is the first snuff story posted to Chrystal's?