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End of School
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Comment by Silvia. on 07/01/12
this is a very bad story! Comment by MARK DOUGLAS on 05/09/08 ARE YOU GOING TO DO MORE OF SONS INTO DAUGHTERS? Comment by Rone on 05/24/06 Nice and a lovely story ..the next chapter might have her/him at a dance winning the prize...thank you for writing this good job... Comment by julie j on 08/17/05 a great story welltold&written its amazing how girls get there own way what a way to go it makes wish iwas sam still one can dream well done more please Comment by Donnatella on 03/13/05 A nice, tender, lovingly told little story - I loved its gentleness. I am, however, pleased to note that it is just a fairy story, (well sort of) and not really likely to happen very often. Comment by Gina La VaLampe on 03/02/05 Wonderful story Shelley, well written, great fantasy, please continue... Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 02/27/05 Wow, good story! Complex character that Kate, turning out to be not nearly so nice as she appeared. So she was really lying when she told sam that she would have been Ok if he hadn't dressed that first day. She just gets off on the feminizing and when that's done dumps the guy(?). Or does she really believe her own lies at the start of each new relationship? Kate needs professional help. I think Sam should have warned the new boyfriend, as I would think him ending up liking being feminine for itself, as in Sam's case, would be rare. I could see this as being dangerous for Kate if there was what I would consider a more normal reaction of "You bitch! I only became like this for you and now you dump me for the kind of guy I used to be!" |
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