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End of the Run
by Rosie

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Comment by whyguys on 04/01/09
Entertaining look at the future.... I hope.  What could be more positive a message than seeing the male of the species getting his mind, his priorities... and HIS SEAMS STRAIGHT.  

... a male who cannot curtsey has NOT been properly educated!


Comment by rone on 05/23/06
I think the father was trying to save the boy from crule
and mean people... I would do the same ....
you did a good job writing it and made it interesting..
it does stir emotions...thank you  Rone

Comment by Early June on 04/27/06
Liked the other story so well, I read this one too.  It again brought a amile, but then I was deeply saddened by the abuse the father and the son were receiving at the hands of these monsters.
I almost wish---- No!.  This is your story.  I just hope the boy finds some people less cruel than the one who caught up with them.
Beware the female, she is, by far, the more deadly of the species.
Again, thank you for sharing this tale with us.



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