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Enforced Bridal Satin Deepthroat Cock Sucking!
by Virginia Satin

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Comment by best pron on 12/20/18
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Comment by matzcrorkz on 08/03/14
LMF1AD I really like and appreciate your article post.Thanks Again. Keep writing.

Comment by ariel on 06/22/10
hi,

loved your "enforced bridal satin..." story. as i read it, i became hard and wet, and experienced a cum that made me tremble.

are any more stories like this in store?


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Comment by on 02/15/10
Wonderful story, one of the best I've read. Please write some more.

Comment by pam on 07/15/09
Virginia,

i'm with Candice and LaurajeanTV.........please write more,............ and damn all the punctuation remarks crap!....

and notice the date on the last posted comments and mine....there are no accidents!!

please!  write this out!

xo pam


Comment by chetan on 07/15/08
beautiful story... continue pls

Comment by juliej on 06/16/08
as per my previuos comments the next part should be intersting

Comment by juliej on 01/21/07
an intersting story very fast paced could be a lot better if the pace slowed down a biit a good story though              

Comment by Petra on 01/08/07
Your story made me very horny! I wish I would have experienced such an adventure by myself! I can really hear the rustling of the gown, smell the perfume, feel the tight whig and the choker!
Beautiful! Write more of such fantasies!
Please!

Comment by Stefanie on 10/11/06
Oh my! You got me all excited. Just loved your story.

Comment by Candice on 09/08/06
Damn all the squabbling about punctuation etc.   I think that it is a lovely story, one which is dying to be expanded on.   So, Virginia Satin please go to it.

Comment by Missy on 03/23/06
For Heaven's sake!  This was darn near impossible to read as it was just one long paragraph!  please get a book on how to write (Strunk and White for one) and USE IT!!!!  I can't tell if I like it, because i could not get through it!

Comment by trickericke on 11/09/05
Very GOOD Story kept MORE then just my interest up

Maybe a second part to this one, what her daily life is like now

And continue the series with another victim or two, maybe?

             

Comment by laurajeantv on 07/26/05
That was a wonderful story, love.  It has brought me over more than six times in the past forty-eight hours just thinking about it!  Thanks for sharing your talents with us.

Hugs,

Laura Jean

Comment by Kate on 07/20/05
It was a fairly good story, but it would have been nice if it were broken into paragraphs, and every sentance didn't end with an exclaimation mark.

Comment by domesticCleaner on 07/17/05
A couple of things need to be addressed for your next story.  You need to use correct punctuation and sentence structure. That means capitalizing proper nouns and names such as "Friday". Break your essay up into paragraphs with appropriate line spacing. Continue to write and expand on the story.

Comment by domesticCleaner on 07/17/05
A couple of things need to be addressed for you next story.  You need to use correct punctuation and sentence structure. That means capitalizing proper nouns and names such as "Friday". Break your essay up into paragraphs with appropriate line spacing. Continue to write and expand on the story.

Comment by sissyemmy on 07/17/05
that was a very good story, and being a VS 120's smoker is a dream of mine, i do so hope You right more, so i can quit reading this one!! big smile, emmy

Comment by sw on 07/17/05
good story,maybe a part 2 ???

Comment by slimv on 07/16/05
Hey Virginia, I'm a sucker for VS menthol, so you had me from there.  It was good but it was short.  How about something longer.
-sv



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