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Enhancements
by Jennifer White

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Comment by jjconn on 06/16/17
as soon as he turned into a woman their marriage ended!! if she really loves him as she says, they have to remarry in a state the recognizes same sex marriages or he better sue the ex jen & femco for changing his sex unwillingly!!!

Comment by suba me on 05/15/17
MuWHvn Im thankful for the post.Thanks Again. Will read on

Comment by Jess Arita on 08/15/03
I agree with Fret and Jake.  The ending didn't work.  The story was good until then, though.  Unless his wife has always been a lesbian, why does she want to turn her husband into a woman?  Why does she do it without his knowledge?  Why does he accept it immediately?  And how does no one in the world notice that Glenn has disappeared off the face of the earth and Dawn is now living with his wife?

Comment by Fret Pearson on 08/15/03
The story was pretty good until the end.  Glenn's sudden acceptance of being changed into a woman seems completely contrary to his character introduced up until that point.  It made a decent story fail.

Comment by Jake2.0 on 08/13/03
I liked this story up until close to the end. I would rather have him resist the change than accept it so easily. I wish this happened by accident also. It makes the wife look like a jerk. What are her motivations for doing this? It would be a better read if she didn't know what would happen either, and they just adapted to him now having the same equipment as her. I'd rather not that he changes completely. Men with vagina stories are more interesting.



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