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Enter the Rose
by Valentina Michelle Smith

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Comment by stanley morton on 10/16/11
Will Rose have anymore adventures?

Comment by STANLEY MORTON on 10/06/07
THE ROSE WILL RETAKE THE NIGHT WITH AGENTS SUCH AS MELODY. SHE WILL TRAIN HER AGENTS AND IF THEY WISH, TURN THEM INTO WOMEN. I HAVE NO DOUBT THAT HER TRAINING UNDER MASTER WU, DIANA AND THE ACADEMY AND HER CONNECTION WITH THE ELLIS FOUNDATION AND THE HUNTER GROUP WILL GIVE HER THE MEANS TO TAKE THE ACADEMY ESTATE AND TURN IT INTO A TRAINING GROUND FOR HER AGENTS. AM I CLOSE IN MY ASSESSMENT TINA? IF NOT, YOU HAVE TO ADMIT, GREAT SPECULATION ON HER GOALS. AS YOU CAN GUESS, I LOVE ROSEBUD AS MUCH AS I LOVE DIANA. TO ME, UNTIL YOU HAVE WRITTEN DIANA'S FINAL STORY, SHE STILL LIVES.

Comment by Rone on 05/04/06
 exelant start  we need to see more of the rose ...

thank you ....Rone

Comment by slothrop on 11/25/04
Tina- love to see this, you captured a great feel and tone, and Diana deserved a great heir.

Why it seems like just recently little Rose was just a boyish child....

Thanks again for a great new series. Angel and crew are just a few of the characters who owe their inspiration to your Diana.

Ty

Comment by Jane Hudson on 11/23/04
Good story

Comment by Jenna on 11/21/04
Kewl, nice twist on the shadow.

Comment by Pippa K. on 11/19/04
Very nice intro to The Rose!  I hope we'll be seeing a lot more of her in the near future.  She deserves to become a regular, and there's a lot more we need to learn about her, which I hope you'll dole out only in the smallest amounts over the longest possible period of time, a little in each story.  It's great having a mysterious character!  About time, too, that Angel and Allie had a little more competition in the bad-guy head-banging department.  Nice work!



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