For the average person a verbal description of a complex arrangement is useless unless diagrams are included.

This is simply horrifying to even think that someone would allow this to happen to themselves or that somebody would do this this to a living human is very disturbing to me. I'm very glad this is only fiction.

Hi,
You're a good descripive writer!  Well written and nice details.
Unlike the others who commented I am not favorable to the possibility of ones demise.  

Gail

What Hiliary failed to hear was the concrete being mixed, ready to seal the steel structure, permanently.
 "Mistress," the Assistant said, "I think this is a great idea, just imagine say, oh, three months from now we report her missing, or something."
 Mistress thought for a moment, then replied, "Splendid -- She did mention me in her will. I wonder how much we'll collect?"  

Gail

The Centurians prices were from an earlier draft -- it seems my files got corrupted and I did not know it - I had intended to delete the prices from the version I sent to Crystal.
Sorry.
Oh Well - no permanant damage.
hiliary

A truly sinister story.  I think the ending is my favorite part.  

I have always had fantasies about mind control, and the White Noise was very.. tasty.

I am not sure if it is an editing problem, but the addition of the prices of the restriants detracted a bit in my opinion.

Overall though this was quite fun, I will keep looking for other,
Gail