Loved the story, pretty good description of Jimmy becoming used to being a girl thought the blow job was going a bit too far though, I would never do that under any circumstances , and would be liable to bite it if it was forced into my mouth .Loved the face Jimmy retained his girl outfits for future use if he wanted to do it again without being forced .

FbuKnJ Some really   choice   articles  on this  site,  saved to bookmarks.

Overall, the story here was fairly decent; however, a bit more specificity regarding the crime for which "Zoe" was being punished would have gone a great deal towards creating a believable story, from a character development perspective.

Not a bad effort, though. Thanks for writing it!

    This type of story always poses a question. Unless the person being forcibly feminised really wanted to take part in his adversaries games, what would happen if, when fully dressed and made up, he literally tore the clothes off damaging them so badly as to be unwearable or repairable. Garments not flimsy enough to be torn by hand could be shredded with a knife, scissors or broken glass/crockery. This would be particularly effective if done in a public place and would also definitely indicate to viewers that the victim had no desire to appear feminine. Antagonists reprisal with threats of confinement or starvation would be countered with exposure to social security or a welfare association on eventual release leading to jail terms. If acceptable clothing was not provided the victim could strut around in the nude to embarrass his tormentors. It would require determination and willpower but could prove an attempt at forced feminisation to be too expensive.  

i love the story i felt like you wrote the story about me

Tring to understand and Yoron, they are right about the story.
This story is disgusting and ridiculous.

I just wish it was a longer story, I enjoyed it. It would have been nice to know what they did to get themselves into hot water like that. But maybe that is fodder for another story.
Keep up the story telling Robyn, I will look for more from you.

Dear Robyn,

I woke up at the normal time today. My Mistress/Wife is still sleeping. So, it was off to, "Storysite."

Over-all, I liked the storyline. As another reader, Ms. Jezzi, indicated, I, too, would have preferred to have no forced sexual conduct included.

You only wrote this one story; that's too bad. Yes, there some background information missing but a writer improves their technique, when they, "hear," comments from the readers.

I've been, "out of the closet," so to speak for over ten years. I would have loved to have been raised as a girl.

I started to wonder where all this money was coming from, then I was brought back into reality, this is fiction. It's too bad School was out or Zoe didn't have a summer job.

You did a very good job on the descriptions of Zoe's clothes. I liked you having your main character taking public tranportation. "Zoe," should have had a cell-phone, too. Another good reason for the, "forced," cross-dressing boy (are any of, "us," really forced?) would be for his sister to have always wanted a younger sister, and our, "heroine," would be cross-dressing for that reason. That storyline has been used. It makes the reader, in my thoughts, makes the title-character more like-able.

Please do write more. I noted that you've only written one story and this was from a few years ago. If you have the time, please do write more. For me,the story-size was just right. I'm in the middle of reading the chapters of, "Amanda's Maid," but each chapter is so long, I don't often have that amount of time at the computer.

I am, truly, my Mistress/Wife's Housemaid/husband. I still work two part-tine jobs. I also have to do all the girl chores in the house. All our neighbors know that I'm my Wife's Housemaid.

Please do write more,

Sisterly yours,

"Missy," Susan

P.S.:
Don't pay any attention to that, "trying to understand," person, who couldn't even use their real name nor leave their e-mail.

POSITIVELY SICK.....SICK.....SICK.
Mother, daughter and friends were disgusting.  The author should be totally ashamed.  This kind of story does not help anyone to understand why people cross-dress or live their lifestyle.  If you want to write garbage....congratulation...you did.

F*ng Depressing gay wet dream of humiliation and abuse.
By his own family too.

And no one sees anything wrong in it?
I can't see this happen in reality.

And anyway, if it did there would be no family left.
But in this case there never was right.

Yoron.

Great story, I loved the surprise ending at the dance - didn't see that coming! (pun intended)

great story but he was so mild it would have been more intresting to know what the crime was

LOVED this story!!! AND- like the other 'girls'- I would love to have known what Jimmy/"Zoe", and Danny had done to deserve this type of punishment! Keep up the good work!

      I really liked this story! Yes the story of a boy being forced in dressing like girl as punishment by his mom and sisters has been done a million times, but this story does it right. I liked how Zoe was humilated (maybe now he knows how a girl feels like to be forced) by her sister and her boyfriend. I only wish Zach would not have known Zoe was really a "he." Either way ****Stars! I recommend this one!                    
                                          alicegarden01@yahoo.com

    A very nice story, but exactly what did the two boys do to the girls? I feel it should have been included to give the reader the why's and wherefor's for their perdicument. The fact that everything, putting on make-up, what dress or skirt to wear and mannerisms, were becoming second nature to Zoe and that the relationship between the "two sisters" was becoming better, I thought that Melissa would have been more sympathtic towards Zoe. The inclusion of Zoe's sexcapade with Zach was a bit too much. I feel it would have gone over better if Zach did not know that Zoe was really Jimmy, and having Melissa find them in a compromising position, so to speak, Melissa then could have broken up with Zach. Jimmy, as Zoe, would have felt what girls feel, whenever they are forced to do something, he then would really have learned his lesson. Danny's much bravado about Zoe's "talent" is another lesson well learned. I just think that Melissa's discovery of her boyfriend with her "little sister" would have been a better way of the two siblings getting to know and appreciate each other. But then again, I'm not one for total humiliation, just enough to make a point! I'm more of a "sweet and sentimental" type of "girl"

the story is good but the thing that is missing is what they did to get into som much trouble well written

Perhaps I am unlike the typical StorySite reader in that I do not want to nitpick tiny details in a wonderful story.  It's obvious that you worked hard on the concept, plotline, characters, and development in the story.  Sure, I and everyone else would have differently, but your story is a brilliant reflection of what you wanted to do.

I believe it's counterproductive to let one minor detail like perspective outwiegh the excellent and believable detail of this work.  Considering I barely skim most stories, this is an exceptional piece, and I hope nothing discourages Robyn from writing many more.

In one sense, I think your story is excellent.  By not revealing what the crime was, you really prevent us readers from sympathizing too much with the protagonist; we simpply don't know whether the punishment fits the crime or not.  Most stories of this type suffer because we know that the punishment is much more severe than the crime and the wronged women become become evil bitches and the wrongdoer becomes the sympathetic victim.  

On the other hand, I cannot envision a crime so bad - but not requiring jail - that a mom would require of her son, even posing as her daughter, conduct of a near homosexual nature.  And despite not knowing the crime, Melissa did become an evil selfish bitch to me at the end.  To force him into oral sex after he had mostly bitten the bullet and done the time seems cruel, and it had to be excessive, or she wouldn't have minded if mom knew about it.  If I was James, just knowing she didn't want mom to know would make me turn in my sister and take the consequences.  I also agree with Jane Hudson that he probably hates his sis now, and she'd better watch her back.

Finally: << The fall semester passed, and I was told that we'd be getting a guest for the holidays.
Zoe LeMercier.  >>

Given the phrasing, this must be official from mom.  Why?  You don't write anything about him screwing upo again.

The first part of the story of the petticoat discipline had the tension and the fear of being caught. But the last section destroyed whatever the first part achieved, what fear would make him continue to wear a dress? Everyone now knows what he did.

Great story.  I liked the final dance, but it seemed the sister was harsher than she would be at the dance.  

kisses,

amber

Oh dear sis if your borther is not tg but a joe guy he going to hate and hate you so much and one day.Sleep with one eye open if I was you sis.

 Congrats Robyn, pretty good job for your first story.  A bit of a stretch for me to see a mother and sister pushing a 14 year old son and brother into sexual situations ... I guess we grew up in different eras.  Nice descriptions of dresses though.