this second part of the story is very interesting the way the modes are switched each time well done lookforeward to the next part

this is an excellent story most enjoyable &well written please write more i will comment further after the storys completyion but a brilliant start

When I was priviledged to read the first rough draft of this story I knew it would be a winner - truly there is nobody does this kind of thing any better than you.
My only fear is that you have made a rod for your own back in that parts three and possibly four are essential if you would have your readers retain their sanity.  You will find it difficult to improve on the pasture game with Judy in the role of the slutty slave, and I am worried, even though this is only make believe that one of two things might happen to the trainee Amber as Karen teaches her and trains her to be a puppy.   Either she will crack up completely, lose her mind over the indignities she will be saubjected to or she will struggle through in a partially deranged state and nigh on kill Karen when its her turn to be mistress again.  A bit of both might work.
Whichever you decide will make reading it both pleasurable and essential - I can hardly wait.
Love you.

I very much enjoyed this story. I liked the harsh, extreme bondage she received, I liked the semi-public aspect of it, and I really liked the unique "find the key" treasure hunt she had to complete. If possible, please write more in this vein.

Thanks for your work,

Grey (Gary) Slayer

Dear Ms. "Karen",

what a wicked and very wicked story. The narrative was excellent (of course, i've read so many of Your stories), the plot diabolical, and yet there was a lot of political correctness that allows the newbies not to be uncomfortable.

i, of course, sincerely enjoyed it. All of it. Some, like the beginning part, i fantacize about. Some, like the middle part, would worry me (Alot!), and some, like the end, would simply terrify me. and yet, i would be dumb enough to do this, ask to be allowed to do this, and fight or excuse myself later, which your character has obviously made impossible.

It all goes back to being careful about what you wish for.

Thank You for a great story. i hadn't known you were still writing. Your site is restricted (no i'm not cheap, but my money goes into latex et al)

be well be happy, write more and thank You,
sincerely

latexslut

I can identify with this story. Frequently, my Mistress and Master keep me in inverted bondage and hanging from a large beam in their barn for most punishments for even the most minor infractions. Sometimes even guests are invited over to witness my predicament as Mistress stripes me with her single tail whip. If you've ever been hung upside down while wearing your French Maid skirt and whipped you know it's not always enjoyable, especially when others are sitting in chairs watching. Very humiliating.

sissy slave

Hey Girl:
Sorry for not being in touch - tight financially so no internet access at home (library and school have kaboshed messenger services due to virus threats) and my pcs still down.

'Nuff.  

Glad it is fiction you wrote based on my "The Challenge".  Sill, idea has merit, and maybe one day you and I will both be in the fix our little minx has found herself in in your treatment.
lolrotf :)
hiliary

Enjoyed Cindi. The apsrt where he was stripped and dressed as a maid was the best

Hi Sis,
      you allready know I think you are a little kinky LOL.
Great story, nice to see it posted here.
Love and Huggles,
Chrisl