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Executive Assistant
by Jacki Pett

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Comment by Lelie Paige on 05/26/18
I fell in love with the story because of the subtle way  Connie feminized Jeffrey. Unisex hair. Unisex clothes. Sort of a male appearance with feminine flair. Eventually more feminization along the way. And Jeffrey had no choice but to submit to being turned into a woman. Lovely story.  

Comment by Roy johnston. on 02/08/18
Really enjoyed the story. A Vast difference to all the others.

Comment by Sam on 01/30/14
Great story Jacki,i really enjoyed it

Comment by Avinash on 01/06/13
Peggi D'Angelo - The wedding looks beuiatful and the festivities look like so much fun. Wish we could have been there! Jacki   you look so beuiatful, so happy and like you were able to really enjoy everything. We are very happy for you.May 1, 2010   11:45 am

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r8u6Ev The Author is crazy..!

Comment by Zyah on 09/19/11
This is way more helpful than antyihng else I've looked at.

Comment by Laura on 07/17/10
I loved your story and I love the way you tell it.

The only thing I found wrong with this is when you switched Jake's name and started calling him Gary. It was a little disconcerting and stopped the flow of the story.

Other than that, this was an excellent piece of work.
I truly enjoyed it.


Comment by Vivien on 01/03/10
A very lovely and wonderful story!  I did feel a little left out though at the end as I wished it had continued with the explanation to Jennifers parents and a marriage of course.

To the one who wrote "Trying to understand".  We do not understand it either and it is even tougher to try to explain why we are who we are!

I am pleased how ever that a minister is trying to understand and not be judgemental! Thank you for this as we just wish to fit in like everyone else does and also to be useful.  
Some of us are born with this problem  but most of us begin to feel these things during our teens and it is a terrible battle let me tell you!  Myself I fought it for forty nine years and could not take it anymore, nearly commiting suicide before I reached out for help.  I have to say now though that I have never been happier in my whole life.

Anyway, thank you so much for trying to learn, to understand without being judgemental.


                      Sincerely


                                 Vivien Britton


Comment by Phyllis on 05/24/09
I loved this story. Had it been in book form, it would have been 'unputdownable'. I particularly liked the feminine affection shown by Jennifer to Connie, Virginia and Patty. She kissed them and she hugged them and in doing so made me want to kiss and hug them too. How delightful it is to feel feminine. Many thanks, Jacki, for bringing out my innate femininity.  Phyllis

Comment by Trying to understand on 01/28/09
Excellent story.  I got confused in part IV when Jack's name was changed to GARY.  I think the author should go back and edit the story to keep the continuity right.  I found another reason to try to understand those who choose to change.  I am a minister and cannot agree with just deciding to change.  But I am trying to find ways to understand and minister in a more compassionate way of those who do go through the change.  Being a victim of a physical hormonal imbalance with no known way to change things, I can see why one might want to "go all the way" with a change.  I still have to base my overall commitments on the Holy Scriptures but I do want to be understanding and not judgmental.   Again, I cannot condone with God condemns, but I will leave the judging to Him and seek to love, and minister with compassion and understanding.  I hope this makes since with you.  Just a kind word from a preacher, Jesus Loves You and wants to be everyone's Lord and Savior.  Please look at John 14:6ff.

Comment by Silvia. on 12/02/08
A wonderfull story.
Silvia.

Comment by leslie on 02/13/08
Jacki,

Executive Assistant is one of my all time favorite stories. So well told! So sweet. So girlishy seductive.  You are a doll of a writer. Love and kisses,

Leslie


Comment by Antonia on 11/21/07
I found the Executive Assistant to be one that took me over.  I HAD to continue to the end. It is a wonderful, clever story. Congratulations.   I hope I enjoy the rest of your stories as much.

Comment by DeeDee Clark on 05/24/05
Who is Gary in the forth chapter and was it gary or Jack who deflowered her?

Comment by Another Brian on 12/10/04
Jacki! You are a pet.
  I'm just starting my fourth read of the "Executive Assistant". Averaging about once a year. I find the story irreplacable and unique in style and quality. Thanks for the memories
Another Brian

Comment by Francine on 05/29/04
Hi Jacki  :)

I have enjoyed your stories.

Is there any new stories in the works?

Hugs, Fran

Comment by Francesca Barrie on 04/29/01
Another brilliant story by a talented author who is fast becoming one of my favourites. Please keep them coming.

Comment by Diane Sutton on 04/14/01
A Wonderfull story, great content, immaginative, marvolus use of what I would call the mechanics of a story, using proper grammer. And I can't begin, to put into words, the ability the author has to keep the interest of the reader, as she unfolds the story. If you tend to like long stories and find that you don't want a great story to end then this is your cup of tea. This story is a classic, which should be required reading, for anyone wishing to take on the task of trying their hand at writing. And, having read some of Jacki's other stories, I can say, that all of her works are worthy of your time. Grab a cup of coffee, tea, or even a glass of wine, and download one. Sit back and enjoy you won't be disapointed.



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