I've must have read this story maybe a dozen times and each time is as exciting as the first - Never enough. First read it when i was a teenager and still read it now as an adult.

Jacki Pett has truly been a inspiration for me to transition and become the person i know i always should had been. Its such a shame that she isn't still actively writing TG Fiction today. I WOULD PAY GOOD MONEY TO READ MORE!!!

If you haven't read "The Return" by Bluto - you should as it is the sequel to this story. however Its interesting that the ending of "The Return" seems to be missing, i remember more to the story that doesn't exist anymore :(

Jacki Pett I LOVE YOUR STORIES - PLEASE COME BACK!!!

I have to say that I got wrapped up in the Laura journey but being the romantic that I am, couldn't have more UNhappy with the ending. How about ED coming the rescue and how dare the girls and Jack let him/her get taken by such a monstrous ogre after all their hard work. What a waste. Sorry, but I wanted Laura to stay in the arms of the ones who were starting to really really like, love her.

Just a super trilogy. Well done.

Absolutely magnificent.  I felt for Laura/John all the way.

There is a critical shotrgae of informative articles like this.

Fantastic story; couldn't seem to put it down.

Wonderful, simply wonderful story!  I love long stories, especially when they are superbly written like this one was.  Now on to the sequel and I am sure it will be as exciting as this one surely was and or is.

Keep up the fantastic work Jacki. Your a great author!

omg such an adventure i couldnt stop reading lol n tword the end i felt soooo confident that she would escape this time n was so sad that he didnt oh well awesome story laterz

I think this story was well written and I had a hard time walking away when I had to. That said I kept wishing that John/Laura would have been successful in her escape attempts. I think that I would have rather killed myself then ended up in that situation and those bitches in the loft should all be put to death but not without a lot of suffering first. I think Jacki Pett has a very morbid sense of humanity.

a brilliant story of which i found to be very interesting you have a great way with words &sofar all your stories compound everything that makes ithem really exciting well done i will cooment once i have finished the next story brilliant

So the bad girls win and get to continue to be able to wreck more lives.  Were you psychic in 1994, taking your inspiration from the 2004 election and adding a TG twist?

Jacki, your writing is very interesting and deep.  I love a good mystery and of course I am enthralled along this type of story line (the "Blood Work,"Taking Lives","Entrapment" sort).  Your ending was as great as the beginning with the twist of leaving us unknowning what Laura's true fate was and that she actually was gone for ever. I had just finished watching "Scret Window" with Johnny Dept and you did as well here as they writer did there.  It was not a "relaxing, easy reading" story at all.  It grabbed me and wouldn't let go and I had a hard time finding places to stop reading.  I was exhausted at times by pace of this story.  You succeeded in involving me into it and feeling the different characters emotions with mine.  I loved and hated Tina, Connie, Jack, Margaret and Ben throughout swinging back and forth with those emotions. I felt so sorry for Laura (I forgot totally she was John regardless of you continually reminding us of that) and yet wanted to see what was going to befall her next. I was excited about her training experiences and outings (wishing that was me at times in her shoes / only I would have been willing). I cheered her attempts to free herself especially the very last in the airport.  I hated to see this one end and now I have to wonder as one does with stories like this.  This was better than a great workout at the gym.  Thank you Jacki!

My god what a story I love being Jane and I just love sex with Guys but John !!!!.I think there is one faultin this great story most guys  would kill themself rather than live like that.Me I be in hog heaven but a A1 non Tg guy he  would top himself once he knew there was no way out .Boy them girls are real evil but women can be more dangerous than men. BUT MUST SAY GREAT STORY

This story fasinated me as Jacki has a great talent and shows it so much in her fine stories. There may be a few items where things aren't just perfect but, taking into account the length of her stories this could be expected as it's very hard to keep so many plot lines at the front of our minds when we write.

And authors like Jacki having written so many stories it's sometime difficult to remember all the little nuances that are in a story when they come back to place another chapter (or part) within that story.

I found the story to be very well formulated with a lot of interest and more than enough turns within it to keep me very engrossed in the next paragraph to come.

Jacki is one of a handful of authors who have the ability to capture the hearts of many of the readers here and she will always be one of the finest authors to grace this site or any other for that matter.

Her stories are long however, for those who have the time and take that time to read her works of wonder they will be forever thankful that they did so in the first place.

Diane

A lovely story. From the beginning to the end. Hope you will write new stories.

A competently written tale which maintained my interest throughout. The sudden increase in characters for the dinner party became a little confusing and once or twice a character had the wrong name, a slip of the pen perhaps. Quite cleverly, I thought, I was kept guessing right to the end, Which, being a romantic I wrongly anticipated being a happy one. However there is scope for a sequel, here's hoping. Well done and thank you

I enjoyed reading the Export but did find it somewhat disjointed in places where names seemes to get mixed up, or perhaps it's my reading to fast, anyway thank you for an enjoyable tale and I hope there will be a sequal so we can discover how Laura adapted to he rnew life in Rio.