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Exquisite Excursion
by Virginia Kane

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Comment by Jim Karner on 12/04/15
  Good story line but long diatribes can be boring. Often had to go back to find who was speaking to who. Could be better if rewritten in a lighter theme.

Comment by matzcrorkz on 08/03/14
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Comment by Donna on 01/07/10
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Comment by Dianna on 05/22/08
I didn't like how Danny was forced into this against his will, but I'm still glad she had a happy ending.

Comment by Cleo on 07/02/03
Congratulations on your skillful weaving of a wonderful story. This has been a very joyful experience. I have read many of the Story Site entries and have to rate this one at or near the top of all  of them. I look forward to the remainder of your offerings.  

Comment by Charlene on 05/31/01
Dear Ms Kane,

Thank you so much for "Exquisite Excursion", it took me awhile to read it all, but you should know that everytime I had a chance I went right to your story. It read like a dream come true, very good ending.

Thanks again,

Hugs

Charlene



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