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Comment by Faye Kistry on 04/20/09
Well written piece.  Thought your characters stood up on their own two feet.  I often wondered where that mountain view ad went after the punchline. Good job. Ripe for a sequel too, I mean I kept wondering if maybe the dew only worked for one of them so many times, maybe it'll be Crissy's turn on the flight to Vegas? I mean, she IS a lesbian after all... ;¬)

Comment by Comment on 09/16/07
Nicely done.  I don't usually read stories like this one where the plot (and TG element) is so very secondary to the sex, but this kept my attention for longer than I'd have expected.  Intelligently written and thought out, though I'll admit I was expecting some kind of twist ending that didn't materialize.



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