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Extreme Makeover! Baby!
by Meggan Sommers

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Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 07/04/10
I just re-read this and stand by my comments from 2004.  This is a horror story about an immoral woman taking advantage of an innocent man to further her career. No love here, not on her part, only unnecessary radical and experimental surgery without consent, rape, and brainwashing to feminize him mentally and make him so submissive the poor guy can't even get mad about what the betraying bitch has done to him.

Comment by Silvia      (from Brazil) on 11/09/09
This is one of the worst stories that I read!
Sorry, but is true.
Silvia.

Comment by Hana Turner on 06/21/09
I simply LUV trhis story. If only it was true.

Luv Hana


Comment by Ashley graham on 06/20/09
this was a VERY good story hope theres more!

Comment by suna on 02/13/06
A well written beginning to a long !!!HORROR!!! story.... the lunatic doctor using he/r as a test subject will probably continue til s/he is nursing the baby/ When he/r mind clears enough to realize what has been done because he/r wife wants a baby. Then a mass slaughter of the other sleezy denizens including the new 'real man' he/r wife will have started sleeping with. S/he will have an easy time with a short term mental illness defense.

Comment by Eggman on 09/25/04
I am only 16 years old, & I know a really cool story when I read one, & trust me, this is cool. I hope you make a sequel to this very soon.

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 02/19/04
A well written story that made me angry, but, then, I like stories that make me angry; they give me a cardiovascular workout without the necessity of actually exercising.  I'm looking forward to part two.

<<  Kate did love me, of this I could not deny. >>

Oh?  Somehow the idea of performing unnecessary radical surgery on him changing his total appearance to that of the opposite gender without his consent,  impregnating him without his permission (rape) and, I'm willing to bet given the sly looks and sniggers between the women, brainwashing him into passive acceptance of what has been done without his knowledge, do not seem consistent with any definition of love I know of.  And he has done absolutely nothing to deserve this. What has been done to him is, in fact, a betrayal of love and is immoral, illegal (Think how long someone convicted of all three of these crimes would spend in prison), and certainly an unconstitutional violation of his rights and person.  Medical experimentation of this sort can be likened to what the Nazis did to the concentration camp victims.  I hope he is able to break out of the drug or hypnoticly induced fog they have him in and take steps to blow the whistle on these feminazis who have so deliberately betrayed  and abused him.

Comment by William on 02/15/04
Very good love where it has gone and can't wait to see where it goes. Keep up the good work. Love it!

Comment by Malissa Ann on 02/15/04
This was a very interesting story. I wanted to be pregnent when my wife was having our baby 24 years ago. I still would love to feel life inside of me.
Your story brought back memories
Very well written

Comment by Jane Hudson on 02/14/04
Just loved this story

Comment by Big Fan on 02/14/04
I have only one suggestion about this story...hurry up and write the next part..lol

That was a fantastic read!

Comment by Sharlee Snyder on 02/14/04
Meggan, Meggan, Meggan!!!  My dear, you have done it again!!!! I love your stories and because of the way you gain our interest and then leave us hanging, I strongly suspect you of having a large streak of "bitch" in you.  Naughty, naughty!!  Please continue this ASAP as well as "Life's Changes."  Truly LOVE your work--Sharlee

Comment by Oh2bpreg on 02/14/04
Great story.  Anxiously awaiting the next chapter.  I would love to add this story to my site (Pregnant Men.  http://pregnantmen.ateros.com )  since it fits in with the theme perfectly.



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