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Eye for an Eye
by Lia Monde

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Comment by karen on 02/19/24
THat was a great story bobby got all dressed up like a girl and than screwed up the ass he had to  be embrassed that a woman did that to him.

Comment by Mistress Meredith on 01/06/09
Bravo to Joan and Bravo Ms.Monde'. Well done, indeed. bobbi had this perfectly planned revenge coming to him/her and got exactly what he/she deserved. Icing on the cake might have been having Joan return at noon to watch as the police arived and hauled away the very deserving, slut bobbi.

Comment by Priscilla Ann on 01/29/08
My, my revenge to the utmost -- brilliantly planned by Joan. Very well written. Poor Bobby -- or is it Bobbi?

Comment by julej on 12/14/07
as per my previous comments

Comment by juliej on 09/08/06
a reread I stand by more previous comments more please

Comment by juliej on 04/07/06
a great story highly illegal what was done an eye for an eye good name for storyrevenge is sweet more please

Comment by suna on 02/09/06
The story was good, fair to the villian if only you had stopped when the first person arrived. They may even believe that he was drugged just to be humiliated, not fired.. The people in charge there would have called the police immediatly so the company wouldnt be named or sued.

Yes, i know its a story but things dont live in a vaccum.  A few less words would have been better.

Comment by SassySue on 10/17/05
I agree with the other reviewers.  This was a well written story where the punishment fit the crime, not too severe nor too light.  I look forward to reading other stories by Lia.

SS

Comment by julie j on 07/31/05
a case of sweet revenge for her sister this should serve as a warning to other what a great story well done

Comment by Early June on 07/21/05
This is the first story by you that I have read.  I enjoyed this so much I will read the others soon.  While I am not into violence in most stories, this was handled so well, and the punishment was so fitting for the crime, I was thoroughly entertained and my sense of justice satisfied.  Very well done!  I am certain I do not want to anger this young lady.
Thank you for posting this for us.

Comment by Amber Chalise on 06/23/05
I try not to think of the good and bad in most stories like this. Viewing it from a perspective both acts are wrong, though I love stories like this and the results that ensue. The male victim deserved a harsher fate and something more permanent, but the one night stand definetly is something I wouldn't mind experiencing in some form.

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 05/10/05
In many stories like this the woman wronged ends up the villian because her revenge is so much greater than the crime.  In this case, bravo to the lady - and the author - the punishmernt fit the crime.  If anything, for numerous date rapes, it was too mild.  She should have used permanent magic marker for the makeup, shaved his head and superglued the wig on, and left the dildo up his butt or used it, uncleaned, for the gag.



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