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Fact and Fantasy 1: The Shopping Trip
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Comment by Cindy Satin on 09/08/11
Very promising, I hope it is continued and the outfitting of her brother becomes more extreme. Comment by oldhippie on 08/25/08 wow got more on this like part 2 and 3 ect a lot more you just got started what abouth a dress and takeing him to have his ears pirced and maybe even to see a few of the kids he picked on show tham he not as big as he wants to show every one Comment by juliej on 01/13/07 its good but what was themotivation that caused this embassement more please Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 08/24/06 No motivation is given. He's not a little kid. WHY is he so meekly going along with this? Comment by juliej on 11/09/04 the story was great please add more to it is starting really well &a good read well written Comment by Rachel Rae on 04/24/04 Loved the story. I experienced the same thing when My Mistress took me shopping for some basic necessaries for my wardrobe. I'm slim and trim so most standard women's sizes fit me. It didn't faze her one bit to have me stand while she held the garments up to visually check to see how things would look on me. Salesgirls usually showed up pretty quickly because males in the obvious women's section tended to shoo away the GG's, especially when we weren't buying sweats and jeans. But I loved the story. Rachel Rae reijifu@aol.com My nom de plume is just plain Rachel and I have stories in Storysite. Comment by davie on 08/30/03 Loved this story, I could just see a boy being outfitted as a sissy and Mmmmm so cute I'll bet Comment by Baby Patsy on 11/24/01 Wet my panties reading this great story. More PLEASE Comment by skirtedboy on 10/14/01 I can't wait for a sequal! I've always perferred a gradual change to an instantenous one. Let the bully beg to look more like a girl! Comment by Dawn on 10/11/01 A wonderful short story, impeccably written. Demi sure has a way with words! Comment by Donny on 10/10/01 I liked the story and imagine how embarrassed the brother must have been to wear those outfits. I'm looking forward to reading more Comment by michaelrbn on 10/09/01 excellent beginning, i love this kind of story where the boy is made to wear feminine clothing, but remains recognizably male. hope to see more soon (perhaps a makeover at a salon where he has to deal with a gay staff?) Comment by Stephanie on 10/09/01 AWESOME STORY...Especially where you make him a boy but in girls clothes Comment by Donna on 10/08/01 Delightful. I love the transformation when the charcter is not allowed to forget that he is a male. Please keep these stories coming. Comment by Paula Jutras on 10/08/01 I love this story as well as all your work. Keep up the work and I look forward to more in future. Comment by Sissy Teri on 10/08/01 I LOVE SISSY DEMI. She is my very favorite. Her captioned images stories are the best, but I look forward to her new stories also. |
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