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The Facts of Life
by Jennifer White

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Comment by Silvia. on 02/20/09
I'll never agree with things made against will of someone
I don't think it works.
Silvia.

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 06/01/08
One of your better ones.  Everybody won.  Thanks

Comment by Jockey Strap on 05/27/06
This is one of her best, if not the best realistically possible stories. I like the twists and turns, all of which could have happened, including the parents reactions. We could do with many genuinely possible stories such as this, which is one of the few that could even be a documentary one. Keep up the good work.

Comment by Early June on 07/14/04
Jennifer presents another gem. this one has a happy ending for all. Maybe she rushed a little on this one though as she has a few gramatical and spelling faux pas, not like her usual impecable posting. Thanks for the mice tale JW

Comment by SassySue on 06/07/04
Another excellent story from Jennifer White.  I particularily liked the novel story line and the happy ending for all.

Keep up the good work.

SS

Comment by Annabel on 06/02/04
Lovely short story.  It's nice to have a full complete story (although I do enjoy serials as well).
I particularly like the unusual but highly believable story line and the fact that the narrator is a girl.  All the characters are so real.



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