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Failed Season - Lora's Story
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Comment by Jim Karner on 09/28/15
The aunt Jane stories are a pleasure to read, well written with a story line which does not require a vivid imagination to be believable. Petticoating is still practised today in a number of communities around the world where tradition demands that a youth must spend some time living as a woman before he can be accepted as a man. For a change there are very few errors in these stories - there are some, e.g. laughter and bells do not PEEL - so the reader does not become frustrated in trying to work out what the author intended to say. I would have preferred the aunt Janes to have been written as new stories rather than alternatives to previous tales, I cannot think of a reason why this was not done. Comment by Starbuck on 01/31/09 Sorry to disagree Mia... Comment by Mia on 08/11/08 I think it was a bit of a cowards way out. To make the only student who failed a sociopath. I would have preferred it if it was a normal guy who figured Jane's method out and thwarted her plans. Makes her a bit less omnipotent and perfect. Or if he was unstable it would have been a more interesting story, if she had to deal with failure and someone hurt or killed because the student snapped. Comment by Jane Hudson on 05/18/08 Very good story. Some people are just wrong she is lucky that Wilma watched over her. Before I transition I was always fighting and getting in to bother but that was because I was trying to be something I was not but this kid just plain bad. Keep up the good work Comment by Stanley Morton on 04/29/08 No, Aunt Jane did not fail, it was Lora that failed. Aunt Jane never gave up upon any student in the end. But now that Darryl and Rocky have a child and Aunt Jane is a Grandmother, it will be nice to see the legacy of Aunt Jane around Seasons House. Comment by Anita on 04/25/08 Wow, this shows great potential to become a fantastic storyline. Don't keep us hanging around for the next installment too long :). |
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