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Falling in Love
by Janet L. Stickney

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Comment by thruholewizard on 02/16/15
if only the real world were so kind and understanding , another story I just loved to read .....I wish it was longer ,how did Bill's parents feel when they found out ???Would Bill want her when he realizes she can not give him a child ?Will the Dr pay for the operation? Where is Gail's father ?


   Stephen J


Comment by Mariah on 05/06/13
I know a few people that would love to be accidently jabbed by that nurse, they would even thank her.  Nice touch Janet...you capture our dreams!

Comment by Lisa K on 09/29/08
Great story. I am sure that more than one of us who reads this wishes that the poke in the arm could have been his arm. So how does Gail progress?
I do enjoy your other stories too and hope you continue putting them on Crystal's pages
Lisa

Comment by Stanley Morton on 07/23/07
Janet, Title should be "SHOT IN THE ARM" or "ACCIDENTAL GIRL" to me. Great story of a guy forced into being a girl. But does Gail have the operation or remain a half girl And can she get pregnant???

Comment by Rone Welles on 10/20/06

I  love this story  I could not stop reading it .
the time line and plot kept my interest all the way and the ending
is to dream of ....

thank you Janet for the dreams .... Rone




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