This man really needs to grow some ball's. Ok so you fucked up let her talk you into a bet you lost. So go tell her to piss off once back from your drive put on some of your clothes. Then pour acid over the bitches face woman cant handle being disfigured.

I must agree with the last comment I would give my sister a good fucking slap and tell her to piss off back to her queer boyfriend and take your queer little nephew with you bitch and don't ever come back.

nice story of what could have been,but I would have been crushed into depression so far as to see no way out!! my sister, her husband,my son & even my dead wife would lie to me, all the I care about the most & they could'nt confide in me?? I would tell them all to go to california & stay out of my life, if they want to treat me like a loner, a outsider so be it don't darken my door, you go have your life like you want quit making me think I'm a part of your lives when I'm so plainly not!!! GOOD BYE!!!

    Have read this story a few times since it was released and really thought I had commented on it, sorry.  Love it very much such a kind spirit and fun celebration of femininity.  Thanks Karen Elizabeth.

    Hugs, Kristi

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Karen Elizabeth,I loved your "Last Chance" but this is the icing on
the cake !An amazing tale,beautifully told .I am mid seventies and on my own and it is stories by people such as you that gives me a reason to live----I love you dearly.MayGod bless you and thankyou.

Amazing tale. You're one of the best writers I've read.
You write about love and care, and that's the best thing in the world.
Kisses.
Silvia.

Excellent, Excellent, Excellent.

I can't say enough about this story. It was well thought out and the story line always moved forward.

I could only wish to have been as lucky as Jacki.

I loved the story I wish that was me but I am too old and alone and no family, and i will die in the wrong body, my mother was murdered by the system and I lost everything I had. but this story made me cry for joy, I always cried as a child but was told I should not. I wish this could of happened to me 40 years ago.

I thorougly enjoyed your story and the following true story came to mind.  A professional medical man who is active in the cross-dressing community, discovered his teenage/college aged son, say at halloween time, is also into the scene. FAther shares with son the more intimate moments dressing as female, making a strong mother/duaghter bond. Over time, one finds the son is not only into  relate to his father in a more mother/daughter relationship, but also has strong desire to be a TS. He eventually does have the operationsm, much to the dismay of the father, and perhaps he is jealous. If you were to do some twists on the theme and put it into a very positive way, I am certain you will have another winning story for your fans!!

This story has got to be the best one i've ever read, it's so good I kept thinking this has got to be based on a real life scenario. My heart went out to Lori, but Jaqui, I just kept thinking & imagining why couldn't this happen to me, infact I was a little bit jealous, but in a nice way

                Excllent realistic story.

                                         Thank you

One cool story! Excellent and well written!  Sometimes when I read a story like this I also sometimes wish it had happened to me and this just happens to one those stories!  Wish I had been Lori in real life! Heck, Jaqui for that matter!  

                      Vivien

  You are the best author of this kind of material I have ever had the pleasure of reading.  I devour your stories eagerly and I am desperate for you to write some more.   Come on Karen, please!!!!

I recently re-read this story. It is just as good now as when it was first done.Please--do some more like this! This is great story line and beautifully written. Bravo!!

A nicely written tale that shows the talents of the author. I was constantly captivated by her use of words and the way the subject was being turned into a woman and the former son into the daughter that she now enjoyed being.
I can only say that the story was what I had hoped it would be and the length of it was proper for the subject matter.
I hope to get the chance to read more from this author.