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Family Legacy
by Jennifer Allison

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Comment by Royal CBD on 03/02/21
8UrJ49 Just  wanna  tell  that this is  handy , Thanks for taking your time to write this.

Comment by suba suba on 11/07/19
qy7JMR I saw a lot of website but I conceive this one has something extra in it.

Comment by see pron on 10/26/19
eqyAFl Utterly   composed   written content ,  appreciate it for information.

Comment by see pron on 12/21/18
O6CmD6 pretty valuable material, overall I imagine this is worth a bookmark, thanks

Comment by crorkz matz on 08/04/14
9Gaoeb I really enjoy the article post. Really Great.

Comment by terislut on 10/25/04
No sense of style, no sex, real feminization and dull, dull, dull.

Comment by solon on 06/12/03
This is an unusual story. Basically, it describes the ongoing normal activities of a successful middle class family, with one extra ordinary feature that may well account for the family's continued success. As everyone knows, marriage breakup is almost a certainty in the history of families that can't maintain themselves at high economic and social standards, and while Jennifer doesn't dwell on this aspect, it is clear that the 'men's outings' are vital to keeping the marriages healthy, and this allows the family to invest in its future (rather then enrich lawyers everytime a marriage dissolves!) Quite an interesting idea! Maybe the church and government should look into such 'men's outings' for all marriages! LOL. Well done!

Comment by Annie O on 05/15/03
The one statement "Not one divorce in four generations" makes the whole story so wonderful. A really great read!

Comment by Tina Michelle Smith on 05/14/03
Oh, what a delightful story!  And how I wish I had been born into this family!  Jennifer, you have crafted a truly wonderful tale, a pure joy to read.  I look forward to your future work.



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