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A Fantasy - Part Four
by Caitlin Rose

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Comment by matzcrorkz on 08/04/14
5VOScZ Hey, thanks for the article.Really thank you! Great.

Comment by Fiona on 07/19/14
I have really enjoyed these 4 well written stories. I loved the gentle pace of step by step experience of young girl hood. The hairdressing details are fascinating.

Comment by Silvia. on 05/19/11
Bad story.

Comment by WillSmith on 02/17/11
gyTSZL Hi! I'm just wondering if i can get in touch with you, since you have amazing content, and i'm thinking of running a couple co- projects! email me pls

Comment by Jamie Erickson on 01/02/11
Very well done.  We look forward to the next installment!

Comment by WannabeGinger on 03/19/10
Discovered again after a long break.......   What a beautiful series......  I'd have been happier if Robbi was 16 or 17,  and perhaps had some girlfriend entanglements to sort out (and maybe get some support?) but your hair works descriptions are beautiful,  as are the conversations he/she has.  Nice work!
Love Ginger xx

Comment by himamaster on 11/25/08
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Comment by adult on 10/19/08
interesting site man

Comment by julie j on 05/19/05
great story hope we will not have to wait to long for the next part wonderfull well written thankyou

Comment by Lee on 07/22/04
A very nice, sweet, believable story.  I particularly enjoy stories about pierced ears and earrings.  In too many stories the person can wear large, heavy earrings as soon as their ears are pierced.  In this story I can just picture Robbie with his cute little pearl earrings which he must wear all the time until his ears heal.  I like the chance Robbie has to accept and enjoy each stage of his feminization before moving on to the next.  What a great ending where Robbie is given the choice as to what his mother is going to write on the form for the new school.  In the end it is his choice to be Robbie or Roberta.  After reading all four parts of the story, the reader has to stop and think how he would answer the question.  It's a great ending.

Comment by florentine on 07/21/04
Too bad there won t be a continuation of this story :-(
But it is obviously, no update within 1 1/2 years...
It has always been one of my fav stories.

flo


Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 06/12/04
Well, it's been over a year since the last comment, so I guess there is no part 5 coming.  Too bad, as on the whole, I really enjoyed this "Fantasy".  I loved the hair scenes, but would hope that there would be makeup added, at one of the girl club parties, for example, or June and May decide to add cosmetic makeovers to the salons repretoire.  While it's obvious that mom really wants a daughter, I thought overall that she rather led Robbie rather than forced him; the few times she wernt ballistic are understandable in light of her experfience with men, even though not really fair to Robbie.  I didn't like the sexual overtones of the erections.  Can 8 year old boys actually get erections?  I would like to find out what May did to Jen because of her threats to Robbie; the comment that June seemed to know Jen wouldn't be at the pool seemed to indicate that justice was done.
Maybe part 5 could begin with Robbie's decision to stay a boy, unpopular to all but him,  then jump say 5 years later to new circumstances that lead him back along the girly path again, this time as a teen just beginning puberty - maybe Jen tricks him into hormones or Betty waants her girlfriend back.

Comment by Night Wolf on 03/20/03
I have been reading these stories for a while now This has really shown the best abilites as a story and if instead of parts and changed to be chapters I'm sure it would really make a great book once you finish it on the web.

I was sadden after part four because I think that this story is really just getting started.  I would love to read more of it and hope that you put out another part soon hopefully a loyal reader to all your works!

Comment by Lisa Lynn on 02/08/03
I have been reading the stories posted on this website for pure enjoyment.  I must say that some of the stories which entertain the subject of children subjected to strict d/s and bdsm practices, disturbing.

I couldnt stop reading this story until I had finished Parts 1-4.  I found it to be a well written series of "suggested" feminization.  The series gave Robbie the time to explore his feminine side and eventually make up his own mind whether to remain as Robbie or become Roberta.  I wish I could have been someone's "Robbie" at the same age.

I look forward to more in this series and congratulate the author on a job well done!    Lisa Lynn

Comment by TinaB on 01/06/03
It's wnderful to see that you have resumed this high-quality, tender and unusual story which many readers have been enjoying. I imagine Robbie's intense 'stress over tresses' and his enjoyment of girls' activities while wanting to retain his boy's identity, will continue to animate this great tale, even as his mother's not-so-subtle preferences for his comportment, attire and hairstyles continue to bring  lots of drama into his everyday life. We eagerly await the new adventures as Betty and Robbie are trained to helpout the the beauty salon....!!

Comment by jazzer007 on 12/18/02
What a sweet story! The interraction between the characters (Mom, Miss Ruth {something else besides business going on there??}, cousin Jen, Betty, etc. is very well thought out!.  I read all four parts when I saw the new part added and early on in the plot Caitlin has Robbie meeting his new school mates at church dressed as a girl.  
I love the story and hope to see many more chapters.  
Thanks Caitlin!!

Comment by florentine on 12/15/02
Thanks for continuing this wonderful story,this slow development of feminization,step by step...one of the best stories in this genre

flo

Comment by Sissy Baby Paula on 12/15/02
At last! This lovely story is well worth continuing!

Hugs from Sissy Baby Paula and Snowball (my toy puppy)

Comment by Sydney Michelle on 12/14/02
A delightful blend of physical description and emotional detail as Robbie becomes more comfortable with a stylish appearance. With just a touch of angst to keep it from being impossibly sweet, Caitlin hits jut the right tone to keep the story interesting as it moves along.

If you like your hairstyle stories to explore the experience rather than perfunctorily bunching hair into a high pony, this series is for you. If you understand the anticipation of the journey exceeds the furor of the destination, this series will enthrall you.

Well done, and may we soon see more.

Comment by elnetty on 12/14/02
What a new start. I'm very happy to see, that you write the saga go on. Keep up your good work caitlin and make all old fashion hairdo-lover happy.




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