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Fantasy Gone Awry??
by Brian Gillis

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Comment by Jillynylonz on 04/29/13
 A really well written story that built up sexual tension in steps along the way. I do hope you find the means to continue this theme? Have you written anything else that I can access and enjoy?

Comment by juliej on 09/19/06
a heavy but very good story you make great use of words and story making it great i did not find anything i did noot like about this story it was a fantasy that went wrong butwas enjoyed by both parties used a lot but enjoyed

Comment by leslie on 06/21/05
I loved the story. It got me so turned on. I too like to be tied up. I dream about being forced to suck and take a cock into my lovehole.
I can't wait for the next story.
Keep up the good work.

Comment by Brooke on 06/05/05
Now this is one wonderful story that I wished came with pictures. Very nice thank you for writing this.

Comment by Ami Lamida on 05/09/05
I've only read up to chapter 2 so far, but this story is very good. A little sparse on the setup, but I like that. The story gets to the action very quickly. I haven't found any distracting grammatical errors either. I'm definately looking forward to reading the rest when it isn't midnight. :)

-Ami



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