Extreme masochism. I would not trust you anywhere near children.

First of all I am soooo Glad to continually hear how good Ben is doing. I have known your failmy for a very long time but one of my favorite memories is watching Ben, Danae, and my brother Tyler play T-Ball when they were little.  It has been a couple years since I have been to the beach but last time I was there I remember being in shock as I saw Ben come in to the church at how much he had grown from being the little t-ball player I remember so well. We all pray that his healing continues in such great strides as we have seen over the last 2 weeks.With love, Erin, Chloe,Bethany, and Tyler Austin-Martin.

I really enjoyed this story and have read it three times. My only request would be more description of corsets and cincher belts.

Disgusting.

Dear Rob,
I miss your stories ... have re-read them a couple of times and enjoyed them as the first time I did ...
Hope you'll write again for our delight ... wish you are in good health.
Thank you very much,
mariana

As I am currently writing a historical novel about a 25-year old Jew from Latvia who goes to a concentration camp, if that resort existed, and if possible, I would have liked to try a life like his.

Hello,
Your writing skills are to be admired!  The thrust of the story was excellent especially with it having bondage, crossdressing, and for lack of  better words ,excellent discipline scenes!!!   What really impressed me about the story is the absence of bi or homosexual content.  It is very difficult to find stories like yours that do not at some point slide into some disgusting sexual scene!  Obviously I have no use for any homosexual content nor do I believe that because I am inclined to the actions described in the story that I am therefore somehow part of a minority and should therefore support "Gays."

Should you be interested I have some ideas that might interest you for a future story.  Were I able to turn out fiction I might try my hand, but someone such as yourself is quite obviously more capable..

Gail

You have missed a couple of points Anon.

The 'permission' to do anything to slaves only applies during official fantasy scenarios.  This incident happened during their visit to the 'luxury holiday resort' part of the Island.  There is no indication that the dancer is a slave, but this behaviour would not be tolerated anyway by the Management, where it affects the enjoyment of other guests.

Regarding Jenny, because of the nature of Fantasy Island, no slave can ever leave there to "blow the gaff".  Guests are 'safe', because they would implicate themselves in unacceptable uncivilised behaviour.  Although Peter and Helen can't buy Jenny and rescue her, they do their best to improve her life and make her happy/happier.

Not a bad compromise in the circumstances?

First you say guests can do anything to the slaves. Then you write of a drunk who wanted to fondle a dancer. So, why was he punished? Also, both seemed to like jenny, so why was she left on the island?
My fantasy would be to take a nice strong rope and be a serial killed, just to see what it feels like being a Judge and executioner -- could they arrange that for me?
Sorry, I just don't see love as beating the crap out of someone then expecting them to perform in bed. In fact, I don't love!

I was mesmerizes with the full story ... I really loved Helen, I'd love to have a life like hers !! -smiles-

The only thing I regreted was that you don't describe much the moments of "waiting" anticipation of being disciplined and the after thoughts or moments of reflection of the character after it ...

And I understand, readers most often like reading in full each stroke being landed,I do prefer to see less beatings but seeing more humilliation as a disciplinary measure as you described in a passage on your previous work of "temporary schoolgirl" ...

I'll be waiting for your next contribution, hooray for you ...

Best wishes ... -curtsey-

mariana

really didn't think I like the story but got curious and once started really got into it

Yes please continue i love your constant reference to aprons and pinafores

Onieto

I didn't think I would care to read this story, but curiosity got the better of me. I ended up at the end of part three, wanting more.
Please continue the story. Thanks :)

Very good. Fantastically realistic. It sounds like you've read Sharon Green's work, "Gateway to Xanadu".

another excellent story, I look forward to the continuation of your story and the joys of CORSETS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Great story. Please continue. I like the continuing change in the scenario.