Hi Silvia.  Ann O uses in some of her other stories that girls interested in the lead male character shares him.  Thus, I feel its the same in this story thus Angela and Jade will both be married to Nancy if they could.
Ann you share your love around.  Please be well.

great 2 parter. loved it!!

great story line. Love the way he/she is accepted- - - -

I love the reuse of characters from one story to the  next  ,makes  them  more real  ,multidimensional ,"people " . I love  your stories  and fantastic world  that  you create ,where strong willed ladies are taken with the male and his fem side , I have to admit  it is a beautiful world you create , where people are not so judgmental and hate is seen as the aberration it is .  
    I would  love to live  in that  world

I would like to know why Angela told for Jade, our future wife, and our wedding?
They are lesbians?
If they are. They're betraying Jerry/Nancy!
Silvia.

A SWEET STORY WHICH PROBABLY WILL NOT GET ANY LONGER NOW.  RATHER INTRIGUING THOUGH HOW HIS/ HER SHOES GREW FROM 3" TO 4" WITHIN MINUTES.  YOU MUST TELL US HOW HE/ SHE DID IT.

reading this story makes one feel special it was very good to read and i enjoyed both parts cannot wait to read more  thankyou

Loved the story as far as it went. Am looking forward to the next chapter.
Keep up the writing
Regards
Evon

Okay...I think we're on totally different wave-lengths...cultural differences perhaps?  

Jodie

Anne.  Seldom do I find a story which touches me.  Even less often do I find a story that either teaches me something or speaks to what _I_ feel.  Your tale has done all three.  I can only say thank you, since anything else would be useless hyperbole.  So Thank you.
                            Cathy_t_ said that

My my, should have been only part one.  Like "Gone with the Wind" when it is finished it is finished and just because a lot of people want it to continue doesn't mean it should.  Of course the author of "Gone with the Wind" said no, it was the greedy people that came after her that made a part two.

Dear Annie:    What a delightful tale. You took an old worn out cliche and presented it in a fresh and pleasing form.  You have a gift to be able to do that. And to do it so well.  I am eagerly awaiting your nexr chapter.  Please?  Expectantly, Jan

You provide a window into the transgendered psyche and a loving, supportive and instructive environment for Nancy to blossom. I simply loved this story!

PLEASE continue with this story line... I want to be around when Jerry/Nancy finds out whats in store for him/her :o)))

More Please <Curtsy>

Leave as is.  A nice little peek into a life.

What a delightful story! Ann, I've read many of your stories and enjoyed each and every one. Do keep on!
Elaine

Oh what a wonderful start! Now anyone that gets positive comments from both Jessie Belle and Pervette deserves a very special reward!

Huggles
Angel

This really does fit the catagory "sweet/sentimental.  Congrats!  What I loved and what made the story for me was  this:

<<  "First, my dear Nancy, you are not a servant – you are a most attractive young lady. Second, never lower head – that lowers you, too. Keep your head up high – be proud of yourself, ALWAYS. Furthermore, I am Marti. I am not a mistress, madam, or anything like them.  >>

I have always subscribed to Lincoln's principle that "Just as I would not be a slave, so I would not be a master."  in my TG writing.  I would love to read more about Nancy/Jerry and her mom and friends.

This is my favorite story line, boy caught in the act and is accepted by his/her mother and gets to finally see how the other
half lives. Please carry this story onward, I loved it.

I'm impressed with the gentleness of all the characters, please continue this, I would like to see how Nancy develops relationships with the shop owner and her daughter....Truly, a lot of genetic women often prompt men to "get in touch with your softer side" but, heaven help most of those who do. We all exist on a line that extends between the masculine & the feminine, quite often we move back & forth on that line, some more than others, until we find our place of comfort.

Thanks,
Mary Alice

An excellent beginning to a wonderful sequence.  Your balance of male/female and reasons/motivations for an individual to balance them out was articulate and educational.  Well done!  I will be looking forward to the next installment.

Loved  it more please carry on the good work

Great writing style.  You have made a common plot line feel unique.  I can't wait to read more.

Great story, can't wait to see where it goes from here. Adding the asides brings elements of realism that I particularly liked. The other aspect of course, is the manner in which the daughter accepts and actually applauds Nancy and her desire to be feminine.
Gina

I enjoyed the acceptance Nacy received

Looks like a real winner to me.  You've found a new way to treat
the old discovered/caught theme, & it looks full of possibilities.
Eager to see how this plays out.

I think this story line has real promise.  I hope you will continue it, and bring it to fruition.

Nora

Beautiful, sweet, and enchanting.  Simply delightful.  Very nice job of setting tone, pace, and helping the reader visualize the backdrop almost as if we were truly there.  I would love to read more.

Hugggz!

Please keep them coming as this is well written. It is a rather interesting format. The way you injected information was entertaining. Just one request please do not have the male charecter get a sex change as it is way to many stories both on this site and others. Most crossdressers do not want gender reasignment.

Keep the installments coming...great story...thanks!

Lovely.  More, please, much more!!!!

Way to go Annie O. A really nice start to a fun story. Go for it,it looks like it will be lots of fun. An accepting older gorgeous female. It could happen. Thank you for you are a good writer.

Hugs,

Kristi

Ann -- I was shocked when you set this story in Lima, Ohio... for you see, I live about an hour north of there! I'm always glad to see any story set in my state, especially if it's local!

Please continue with your symphony, for you see, I am also a musician, and Lima *does* have an orchestra!

Hi Annie,
        not my fantasy but delightful none the less.
I was rereading a favourite story this morning and thought of you at one point, strange karma that you post the same day :).

The story was an old one - "I Never Wanted To Be A Girl" by Samantha Michelle. The bit that made me think of you(I doubt she will mind me quoting it here)

"The kids that hurt themselves are not okay with who they
are, or their needs.  She says I'm fine with myself, and that
my problems are going to be getting others, including my
parents, to accept me." I paused to think. "She said that
there are a very, very few people like myself that don't
really think of themselves in terms of male and female.
Which I guess drives most people up a wall, 'cause they
can't understand it. People like Mom and Dad."

Your stories touch me because you truly love people.
hugs, Chris.