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Comment by i love pron on 12/21/18
TzONNs Way cool! Some extremely valid points! I appreciate you penning this article plus the rest of the site is also very good. Comment by stanley morton on 08/23/07 I agree with Alissa. You can easily make this an ongoing series Comment by Stanley Morton on 08/04/07 Janet, a bit of a "TYPO" here. Rita actually became a woman. she is not a cross dresser as Mark-Marcia is . I had to go back to "RITA" to make sure. Janet, I hate to correct you. but as an author, i believe that you want to maintain believability . As a fan, I hope to help you write better. But on the whole, the story is a refreshing change of pace. Here, no guy turning into a girl,. That means no angst of transition. You have proven that you can do more that your typical guy into girl story. proving that you can write in any genre you choose. I know that you stopped sending stories here in 2004. I asked Tigger, he told me you were hurt by critics blasting you for writing the same story over and over again. Janet, I know you can write good heart wrenching stories. You have broken my heart with more than one story. So Janet, please send Crystal any more stories you have. Please do not dissappoint your fans. Your Chrstian fan Stanley Morton Comment by Teri Lynn on 11/06/01 I didn't like it. I expect the 1st person to be in a compromising position right away. There should be some embarrazment, maybe shame,It just left me cold! Comment by Alyssa Davis on 10/26/01 Janet...... |
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