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Fashions
by Janet L. Stickney

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Comment by Mariah on 04/27/13
Janet...This was a really good story that brought back school memories where our principal threatened a similar fate but never followed through on it.  In this story the principal got quite a shock when she realized the boys under discipline turned to be beautiful ladies proper even to the point of outshining the girls of their own class.  When the principal made her heartfelt speech to the girls she admitted defeat while at the same moment giving each her greatest respect and endorsement they had earned for making the show a memorable success for the dress shop, parents, well...everybody in the story except maybe a couple girls who lost their boyfriends!  This story is like a dream come true, I think I will read it a couple more times.  Thank you Janet for putting your imagination to print for our enjoyment!

Comment by Aleesha on 03/14/10
I start reading some stories and very often get disinterested and close but once I start reading one of your stories I have to finish I have to fimish. Another great story, thanks.

Comment by Stanley on 08/29/09
Boys are really "Girls" who never made it.

Comment by Stanley Morton on 07/17/07
You have out done your self. This time, 8 guys become girls. all because they wanted to pick the girls for the fashion show. The way you showed Janet's turmoil over accepting her new identity was great, especially after her kissing. Now these girls need to either become women or keep wearing the equipment they use.

Comment by Alicia Barker on 05/27/05
Great story



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