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The Fates
by Janet L. Stickney

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Comment by Mariah on 04/12/13
 Janet...I have become addicted to reading your stories.  This one is no exception, I often wonder if there is really a place in our world where these events happen just as you describe them!

I sure would like to know the details about the temporary surgery down below, I am at a loss for how it's done but think it would be quite interesting to know about.  There are a few people (men) that come to mind that don't understand why we take longer and use more toilet paper, if they had to spend a month sitting to tinkle as we do that would put an end to "what's takin ya soooo long?"


Comment by Aleesha on 07/04/10
Another great story Janet. This story was written 11 years ago so I am wondering where recent stories have been posted. I would like to hear from you on where I can read more recent stories and that is if you have written them. Thanks.

Comment by JoAnne on 10/19/09
Really great story. Thanks

Comment by AJ on 02/05/08
This is great. I love the way it ends. I wish there was a little more info near the end. But over all I loved it.

Comment by Stanley Morton on 07/03/07
Great story Janet. Yet another story where a brother becomes the bridesmaid. Very sweet & sentimental, just like you no doubt, Janet. Me, I hope you make both a beautiful bride & bridesmaid. Yes Janet, a possible sequel is there.

Comment by juliej on 07/14/04
this is another great story apart from the odd scowl from his father jeff has done very well a female for life i think will happpen and accepted as a special student at a girls scool plus a minor op to make him look more feminine you have a great mind for story telleing well done and thanks it makes me want to be jeff

Comment by Diane Sutton on 12/31/01
It doesn't take long for Jeff to find out the reason for his partents request to have him dress as the girl that they were told about by their daughter Beth.

When Jeff finds out the reason and how it was all brought out to the family he resigns to become Kimberly for the benifit of making his sister extremley happy.

The transformation to Kim is very well done giving most readers the feeling that this author has had much experience with such wonderfull things like this before.

The author's ability to relate the circumstanses that arise as to schooling and such are done in a brilliant way that will enthrawl the reader.

Like so many of Janet's stories this one could have been longer. There is so much yet to be told however, Janet does like to write stories and as this is the case she takes the reader to hights and then leaves them wanting for more which she provides with a great wealth of reading material for us to enjoy.

She seems to hook us with a few stories and then has us addicted to the point that we come back for more and more.



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