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by Donna Williams

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Comment by Silvia on 07/10/15

Comment by juliej on 06/04/04
i thought that was a sweet story its amazing what some people will do and to begin as a little girl what more can one say i feel that with this story you need to go a lot further and explain more perhaps consideration to a sequel how things go on in a new home and life and all the other things that girls enjoy great writing more please

Comment by Susan Pauline Bauer on 03/07/04
This was just the right little story for Sunday evening. It's been a while since I've visited Storysite. The words flowed very nicely. I agree with the other comments, "be careful what you wish for." The ending caught me by suprise. I don't know if I'm correct or not but the age of Donna's new intended, she just might be marrying into money and her little girl my just be a maid again. I like it.


Comment by SassySue on 01/03/04
Yes, that was some Christmas present surprise.  Another cautionary tale of be careful of what you wish for; you might get it.

I agree wholeheartedly with Jezzi that she's a bitch, but he asked for it.

Well written and well worth reading.

Keep up the good work.


Comment by Sheryl S. on 01/02/04
Dear Donna:

This is a very stylish and lyrical vignette -- I simply loved it.  I think you captured the Christmas spirit perfectly, and I thought it was a perfect present.  You are a marvelous craftsperson and have terrific technique.  I hope to read more.

Love & Kisses,
Sheryl S.

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 12/31/03
Well, I think she's a bitch, but he asked for it.

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