I'm out of league here. Too much brain power on dsipaly!

A well written and exciting story. Very realistic. Made you feel with the characters.I think you have very well described how a man would feel in such a situation, especially if his partner were as imaginitive and understanding.

Toni was not needing to threaten Dan with the divorce.
Dan was weak and insecure.
But I liked this story.
Kisses.
Silvia.

I truly enjoyed teading this story.  I am so tired of reading stories where once the male-female roles are reversed, the male figure get put down and demeaned.  The love story between Dan & Toni was done well and I encorage you to keep up your good work.

Stories by Julia are excellent and well written. The changes do not happen overnight and the fact that they are predictable does not in my opinion detract from the story. I do agree with Minty that there could be more drama i.e. the changed male being drawn unwillingly into more more feminine company and activites, with the danger of being exposed lurking under the surface.

I have always being looking for a story where a male has been, in error, enrolled f.e. in the WACS ( or any other service ). The senior officer keeping him/ eventually her in the service as a cover up. I think I recall an American comedy movie where this actually happens but he is kept as a male throughout. Pity. Any takers?

This is a very well written story. You obviously took a lot of care in writing it. he relationship is portrayed realistically and sensitively and the writing itself is very polished. My major quibble is that, to be honest, it's a bit dull. Nothing happens in the story that you can't predict from the opening chapter and I found myself skimming through the last few parts. Seeing that you're writing a serious, realistic piece, perhaps a bit more drama would've been a good idea - at no point did the couple look in danger of splitting up, or of anyone discovering their secret, neither did either of them end up with any regrets, it seemed. Such a trauma should leave a few scars.
I look forward to reading more of your work. Technically, you're writing is brilliant. Thank you.