f5T2TS I really liked your post.Much thanks again. Much obliged.

5nok2m Hey, thanks for the article. Really Cool.

lovely well written story such a lovely feeling of longing through it all.

4MhpmZ Thank you for your post.Thanks Again. Really Cool.

Au naturale!
Adorable, and about as real as it will get.

Robin, you have portrayed the feelings and emotions so very well!  I can really relate to Michael/Michelle, and wish you would continue the tail.  Huggs, Laura

What a lovely and beautiful story; how very real it seemed... al the way through.
Thank you for writing and sharing it.

Oh Robbin I've read all four parts of this wonderful and well written story. As I was getting very close to the end of part 4, I was dreading it because it was coming to an end. I think you may know the feeling about as you have been into a great novel and want it to continue forever. Well, thats the feeling I had or have had with very good stories. Thank you much for writing it and would love to see you do even more parts.

LUV Neecee

This story is simply one of the best of this kind I have ever read.
Congratulations

the best four chapters i have ever read on this topic.the tour to the pool was a bit unlikely,but you have the most wonderful grab of the psykological details of michelles soul.may i suggest that the further story -i can feel it-vill be a break up between josh and michelle and we can follow michelles problems of finding an other boyfriend.josh has fasllen inlove with a girl just as vividly described as ashley.  I wonder wether you are a woman or a transgender man.bbut go on your stories are wonderful

robin,
thank you for the wonderful story! i enjoyed it so much and look forward to part 5.  i'm wondering whether josh and michelle will stay together?  michelle seems so in love but i'm not so sure about josh.  honey, keep up the good work.  xoxo, rena

I'm already a TV and I'm read just about everything which has the transgender theme.  Your stories are absolutely delightful.  I don't particularly like the 'mom' theme but that's all right, everybody to their own thing.  I have a mistress who 'supervises' my every activity.  I recall vividly to this day when we both put on our bikinis to lay out in the sun.  Her C cupped breasts required much bigger cups to handle them but my smallish B cups required just the formality.  My bottoms were thongs.  But some three weeks later, I had a beautiful overall tan, but oh dear, she put me on display and everybody could see how minisculed my bikini had been.  Some of the males actually reached over to touch me and give me a pat on the backsides.  I hated it then but in retrospect, it was one of my shining hours.   Thank you for the story.   Luv   Rachel Raemytan

Dear Robbin:

   Lovely story and would really love to see more.  Gentle, relaxing, sensitive, and full of caring people. I think you have a real winner here Robbin.  Living out one's dream has tremendous appeal no matter what the dream as we identify with your hero. All the better that the dream is about being a girl/woman. Please don't forget about your readers, even though I just found your story today I Will be waiting impatiently for more.

Hugs,

Kristi

I loved the story.  It seems realistic and it was fun.

I just loved the story. I keep looking for the next part. I love the way you brought out his own feelings about her change.I love the relationship with Josh. Keep up the good work.
Love Leslie

This really rocks. I have read a few stories on here and alot deal with the fetishtistic side to Transgenderism/Crossdressing etc. But this loveable tale i can easy see being worthy of screen.. and i would watch it too lol.. usually i stick away from stories with the synopses such as the ones for the 3 parts of this story.. but was glad i didnt this time..

Well done..
mwaah all my best Katie

I agree totally with Jezzi.  I found that the story was not rushed, and the characters authentic.  I really enjoyed that you kept it sweet, and gradually brought the character out.  I look forward to learning more about Michelle.  Courage comes in many forms, and this girl shows it, keep it up.  

Dear Robbin,
  This was one of the best, nicest stories I've read.  You gave Michael a background of gradually working up to the point of passability, not unrealisticly being passable the fiorst time he dresses as one finds in a lot of stories.  You described the transition so well that although I'm over 3 times Michael/Michelle's age I could identify.  You introduced a boyfriend, but didn't jump right into heavy sex like so many stories do; you made the relationship realistic and acceptable as not gay.
 
I'd definitely like to read more, as, while everything has been relatively smooth sailing so far, Michelle is bound to run into both the normal problems a woman grows up learning to deal with and problems from an ever widening circle of people who "know"?  How will Michelle react, for example, when she is read by someone unsympathetic or hostile?  Will she fall back on Michael to deal with it, or use her new found femininity?  How far WILL she take her transition?  Continuing the story   by describing her going through the Benjamin standards process to SRS would not only be entertaining, but also educational.
 
Please continue, and thanks again for one of the sweetest and most realistic TS transition stories I've had the pleasure to read.

wow a great story, if this is your first writting, i'm impressed. it might be hard to continue with this story line, but please start a new story.   thank you

Absolutely lovely story. I thoroughly enjoyed part 1 and the 2nd part is even better. Please complete part 3 quickly. Love & Kisses
Carolyn Renee

I want to comment on part 2 which I have just seen.  Oh God this is wonderful writing, sensitive characterisation, and so true to my own experiences.  It focusses on the feelings and not on the mechanics of feminisation, which makes it so believable.  When we can so empathise with the characters (as I can) that's when I get true pleasure from the story, a true deep erotic and heart-fluttering response.

Cant wait for Part 3!!

Love from sarajane

I really loved the story.  I am 19 myself, and I am just like Micheal in my thoughts and desires.  You are a wonderful writer, and I hope that you will finish the story soon so that I can continue to read and find out what is going to happen between Michelle/Micheal and Josh!!!

Thanks for an excellent story Robin-Renee, the best I've ever read here. Keep on the good job.

Whoa!!!!!! Robin-Renee!!!!!!!  What an absolutely dreamy story. . . Just perfectly slowly developing. . . .You're a genius.  I think that all of us are waiting with envious desire for steamy chapter 3.  Thank you very much for your generous effort. . .

One of the VERY BEST stories I've read in a really long time.  I can't wait for the next chapter!!!

very very good story going here need the next chapter quick. i want to know what happens. i don't use lips gloss myself i use bright red colors, fe-mail me

Excellently handled opening with a real insight into the true excitement of dressing as a woman. This episode has the reader wanting more, let's hope the next episode lives up to the promise.

Well Done

Love

Caroline

Insightful, winsome, and genuine.  Very well-described and interesting characters.  I look forward to the next installment.

Hugs, Josie.

Great little story, well written, but what will happen to our hero / heroine next. Only time will tell.

A wonderful and touching story. Tastefully done with the emotional component easy to relate to and reminisce about. Will wait with anticipation for the next installment.

Hugs

You capture the fear and ellation so well, we have all been that scared and happy all at the same time. I cannot wait for the next installment

I loved this story.  It captured so well the nervousness and excitement of dressing, and the feelings I know so well!

The episode with Josh was handled sensitively, and beautifully.  I also can't wait for the next chapter.  I do hope Mum is sympathetic, and that Josh sees Michelle again.

Beautiful, gentle story. Very tasteful and well developed.
Can't wait for part 2 - with the new dress and shoes :-)

Hope mum is accepting, understanding and helpful.

Thanks Robbin

Sandy

what a wonderful story, well written,and nice attention to detail. i am looking forward to part two, and other stories. keep up the good work

love the well detailed descriptions of the story.

I liked the soft feel of the story and the build-up for part two.  It was a nice touch having Josh leave after just a kiss.  Good writing!