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Thanks for the kind comments.  I'm glad that you enjoyed this story.  I don't plan to write any others with Femme Fatale as the setting or with these characters, but other writers are welcome to do so if they like.  I would ask only that their stories include a line alluding to "Femme Fatale" and me, such as "This story is based on the setting and characters in Cal Y. Pygia's 'Femme Fatale.'"

Quite enjoyable -- coming from a different narrative perspective than the majority of stories published here.  I appreciate this type of variety -- a story all about fun some guiltless pleasure a man who lives a traditional male life can have with our special sisters in a mutually beneficial atmosphere.  Although I enjoy a great many of them, this Storysite has no shortage of continued sagas expressing our anxieties, dark sides, and despairs.  In comparison, I found your story to be pure fun -- light, delightful, and sexy.

My wish would be that you consider not limiting your exploration of these themes by continuing with Derek, Cindy, and Daphne as central characters (although having one or more of them pop-up as "guest stars" in future stories might be fun), but expand Femme Fatale as a chain with several different locations.  This allows complete freedom for a "Femme Fatale" series with complete freedom to explore any themes you wish without worrying about fidelity to the consistency of your characters.  Of course, this may not be consistent with you muse -- and of course, you should follow the latter.  Just telling you what popped into my head in the event that you find it useful.

In any event, please keep writing.  I enjoyed this change-of-pace a great deal!

Huggz,
Sheryl S.