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Femme-In-Eyes
by Jennifer White

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Comment by Jill. on 02/15/09
Why she did not read the instructions?
It's not fair with her husband, he is now a freak.
No, it's not a good story.

Comment by Terrilee on 07/26/03
A really neat story. A truly sweet fantasy with a nice twist. I was nicer because you stuck to the mind change vs. body. Although with the right plot twist, that might be fun too. Terrilee

Comment by Paula on 07/26/03
agree it would of made a good twilight zone  outer limit type story.

Comment by leah on 07/24/03
Well, Jennifer, you've certainly created a problematic situation for your old friends, Camille and Monte. They (and your fans as well) would appreciate your addressing a remedy to this "plight."

Oh, it wouldn't have to be successful to be a success. If the challenge appeals to you, I'll bet you'd find miles of humor (and who knows that else) in the trying. And it might just be interesting for all of us to learn more about how Monique's approach to being a woman might be similar or vastly different from Monte's run as a man. And just how resourceful will Camille become, or might she decide to dump ditsy Monique in favor of a new fellow, where she can start over with the glasses? (I thought it was just men, who didn't read the directions.)

Very nice concept!                  leah

Comment by Sissy Demi on 07/24/03
I liked the story. =)

Short, humorous. Would make a great Twilight Zone or Amazing Stories type of show.



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