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Filthy Little Beast
by Barbi Satin

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Comment by thisisme on 02/02/14
This author obviously knows nothing about christianity. Likewise this author knows little of human nature. You can give the same tool to two different people and have two entirely different outcomes. it isn't because of the tool it is because of who wields it.

Comment by Doberinca on 06/17/12
Abuse - and more abuse.

Safe, sane and consensual???  Even as fantasy it's not attractive. Sorry. BAD!!!


Comment by DimitriR on 03/27/12
Nice story, very imaginative,I can't wait to read more!

Comment by Silvia. on 10/26/10
Bad.

Comment by Molly on 05/26/08
There is a "Goddess Demonica" listed as a pro domme, who runs a branch of something called "Club FEM" in Dallas/Ft. Worth, Texas. While the scenes where Barbi returns to her mother and undergoes training and modification in her dungeon strike me as heavily fantasized, the early portion of the story sounds very much autobiographical. The parts where a small child mistakes abuse for love (of course he wants his mommy to love him, and will do anything), and where he becomes bonded to her when she shows him a little kindness in the midst of all of her cruelty (Stockholm Syndrome) are true to known human nature.

So, where does that all wind up? Well, Jim becomes brainwashed into believing that he is nothing as a male, that the only way he can be someone is to be powerful, and the only way to be powerful is to be female, and a smoking domme, taking out "her" mother's revenge on malekind. Look for Barbi's photos on the 'net -- she is even smoking her mom's shitstix. And read Barbi's story, 'High Rent Tranny Whore', to see if "she" enjoys "being herself" (whoever that may be, or once might have been).

I think that many of the forced fem stories in these archives come out of similar experiences, though this one is much more severe than most. To my mind, it is a human tragedy.


Comment by rone  welles on 01/28/08
 Weird  ,,, good reading material  ,,  not something to look for ..

You did good  ...  weird but good....


Comment by juliej on 05/05/07
a heavy hard story to understand very viscous in terms and decriptions well done

Comment by Sascha on 06/19/06
Quite depraved, but not too over the top. Some interesting twists. It seems a shame that young Jim did not finish the story female, or feminised, and that his father did not re-appear to be forcibly feminised. Personally, I would have liked better descriptions of the footwear, clothes and make-up, but I still liked the story anyway. And YOU are an inspiration Barbi Satin, thank you for having the guts to be you.

Comment by juliej on 05/21/06
a very hard story to follow a lot of abuse that was not thought of before the story was intersting but not easy to folow they must have broken many laws what a way to go

Comment by Johanna on 11/26/05
Really hot erotic and exiting and i enjoyed the reading. But there are several bad logical flaws.

Comment by Shawn on 01/16/04
WOW! After reading your story I must say your mother was a REAL bitch. She should be locked up for inflicting such child abuse on you. It's too bad you had to live such an abusive childhood.



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