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The Fine Print
by Heather St. Claire

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Comment by gj on 12/05/09
Although ,not too hard too see coming(ending).This tale whould fit in one of those TZ,Crypt type story blocks.keeps interest.
Comment by Jan_Wytte on 11/25/03
Dear Heather:
I just found this story. As you are a favorite of mine , I had to read it before it disappeared.  I am soooo glad
I did. This is another example of your amazing talent.
your hapless hero(ine) is inaware of the true depth of the problem till the very end. Marvelous!! Nicely done.  Thanx for sharing with us. Admiriringly, Jan
P.S. I have missed you.
Comment by Lisa Wange on 05/20/01
O. Henery would have been proud to have written this.
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Comment by M on 01/13/01
Great punch line!
Comment by Mr Man on 01/08/01
Excellent! This was a fast moving, descriptive tale of of wish fulfillment and regret. I don't see how it could be improved in any way! Keep up the good work and thanks for writing.
Comment by Pat on 01/07/01
A clever little story. I loved it. Some dreams can be kind of mean, however...
Comment by paul jutras on 01/07/01
agree that it truely belong on the Twilight Zone. A sheer classic.
Comment by Ariel Davidson on 01/07/01
An engaging story in the tradition of great television sci-fi of the past like "The Twilight Zone" and "One Step Beyond". I loved it!
Comment by Terry on 01/07/01
I liked this story.  We all need to relearn that same lesson continuously throughout life, 'Be careful what you wish for.'
Comment by KJ on 01/07/01
O.K. story.


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