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Fiona
by Lauran Travis

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Comment by Lisa Kaufmann on 10/30/09
Loved the story. As others have said, wish that happened to me. I am planning on a cruise shortly and there is to be a costume night. Sooo... maybe this will be my story too.

Comment by CARLAMICHELLE on 11/28/08
I REALLY LOVED THIS STORY. IT IS WHAT I WOULD LIKE TO HAPPEN TO ME, FROM EITHER PERSPECTIVE. THANKS FOR WRITING IT.

Comment by Hydie on 10/17/08
I really just loved this one.Reminds me of some of some of the things that happened to me and my boy friend when I was growing up.

Comment by Tina Coole on 05/10/07
That was a fantastic story. I really enjoyed reading all of it!

Comment by Jennifer Brock on 05/08/07
It was interesting that the stronger of the two friends was the one who became feminine.



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