I wonder how the bitches felt when revenge was on the other foot and the boys sprayed acid there pretty little faces.

This is another great one Jennifer. I especially like that Dave was only trying to help his friend Ricky, and that's what made the girls turn their attentions to him. Talk about the wrong place at the wrong time. LOL
I am enjoying your wonderful stories.

more please

another great story of revenge what a way to go

great story it amazing what girls can think up to punish a little brother i would like to read abouts rickys punishment which is goingto be worse than what david/emily suffered dont keep us in suspence please

Hey guys, stop taking this stuff so seriously, you'll do yourself an injury! Try looking up the word F.A.N.T.A.S.Y. in your dictionary and think about what the word means, it may ease your anguish. Well I enjoy writing 'em anyway!

"Internecine relationships."  Internecine means "mutually
slaughterous or destructive of life"--i.e., rather like the two
cats of Kilkenny, who fought to the death.  I doubt if that's what
you had in mind this early in the story, no matter how things might
develop later on.
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If I had a nickel for every time I made a fool of myself by using
an unfamiliar word without first checking the dictionary, I'd be as
rich as Donald Trump.  You seem to have joined the club.  (I call
it the Catachresis Club, with good reason....)
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Pervette

Well, it is to bad that I am working on several stories right now. If I had the time I sure would write a great revenge story of my own to get even with this sick, evil, over indulgent and perverse group of girls!

So many witnesses to call on and even a promise to help another girl abuse her little brother. Ricky (and I love that name by the way, giggle, giggle.) is right now planning his revenge and when his side kick let's him know what the girls did to him and what they said was going to happen to him, well two heads are better than one.

So mommy wouldn't approve huh? Well he just goes and tells his mommy what was done to him in a very discriptive way. What then big sister? A mother's rage is nothing to be messed with. One mother calls the other and presto those girls are in a world of S---!

To be honest about this, you have a very general fantasy here that needs fine tuning in a bad way.

1) Anyone, especially someone small bound and unable to move as he was would start to cramp after just thirty minutes. Several hours of such bondage and the limbs involved, especially the feet, would need external help to restore movement and blood flow.

2) A dummy tied securely into one's mouth for the length of time his was, would surely cause a constant state of drual until the flow of saliva was exhausted. Puffy swollen lipps and dried drual from his cheeks to soaking his dress would most certainly cause red welted areas and maybe even a rash.

3)Once the mouth turned dry, irritation developes which will cause sores and blisters to develop in a short time.

4) Leather mittens and then another layer of mittens on both his hands tied securely and tight? After the hours he was confined like this his hands would not move! Again, with the sweat and then dry skin, blisters would develop where his nails met his palms.

5) Humiliation like that and unjustified as well would cause anyone to go balistic! The mental pain alone makes me cringe and then the hate would build and build.

6) His own sister even after you let it be known that they did not have that hateful relationship Ricky had with his, let this be done to her little brother who didn't deserve it? GEEZ! Talk about giving someone a hate all girls attitude, you sure did in this story!

7) The girls used lie after lie to justify their acts. Who did they convince? No one in importance that is for sure!

8) Once he tells his mother, a mother we know by your own admission in this story, would not approve of this at all, these girls are dead meat! One mother calls the other and bango! Your %$#&^%$ girls that need a good ass kicking will get just that.

9) Daddy's home! LOL....

As stories go this was pure fantasy, and as pure fantasy goes you shopuld have ended it with "...and then he woke up, thank goodness it was only a dream.

Giggle, giggle.
Angel

The whole taping up the vent holes and leaving him in the sun was not only needlessly cruel, but extremely dangerous as well.  Those shopgirls could be liable as well as Fiona and Co. if he had had a heat stroke.  They didn't take any pictures or anything to insure his not seeking revenge, which I think he would certainly want to do.  He certainly didn't get any credit for being cooperative.  If he warns Ricky, what Fiona said about Ricky, the guys could easily say about Fiona and crew.  "Watch out!"  I see war coming here.