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First a Cousin, then a Sister
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Comment by Mariah on 04/29/13
I must say this was a very pleasant story in particular, the way Joyce's crossdressing led to very substantial advances at work. While nothing was mentioned directly it was nice to see the girl with a criminal record was not dumped on as others expected to happen. Joyce took her word seriously and followed through with effective management that led to due justice for the few that needed it and respect for the girls effort to become a valued employee. The ending was nice because Joyce found love with a person who accepted her for who she has longed to be. Comment by Aleesha on 04/14/10 Yet another great story. You have a gift and I wish you would write more stories. Thanks. Comment by Stanley Morton on 07/19/07 What a story of self discovery! Joyce gains so much as she becomes more lady-like. Her promotions prove her very capable and Bill loves her as she is. Then, she is adopted by her aunt and uncle and gains a sister in Elaine. If any thing needs to be added to this story, try her wedding and honeymoon. Comment by Rone Welles on 10/13/06 it is hard to believe that nobody has written a comment on this wonderful story ...the talent that janet has is God given and well recieved ... this is another must read .. well done janet.. |
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